Hi^^

2012-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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What a nice surprise! We have the same religion! yes, there is a reason we met!!^^ Thanks for god! I'll pray for you whenever I go to mass!^^ Anyway, I'm sorry not to do my homework yesterday! Like I said, I had to go to the funeral and make a call of condolence. I was with him almost all day.. Because he seemed so desperate, I could not just go back to home. I think it is the biggest loss. I don't even want to think about it --I think people visit museums for some resons. First of all, they can learn about history efficiently, by visiting history museums.For example, when I was in high school, I was not interested in my history class. but, after visiting history museum, I could more enjoy my class.This is becuase something that I can see directly can be more memorable. Second, they can enjoy their time there.To be specific, there are other facilities such as a restaurant and a coffee shop in museums.so, they could enjoy famous arts and eat food or coffee at the same time.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름].I am so delighted to know that we have the same religion and thank you for making me a part of your prayers. I will be praying for you,too.Don\'t worry, [이름]. I understand that we sometimes get hooked up with something everyday. Just try to do your homework when you\'ve got spare time. Let\'s also pray fro your friend\'s father. Take care, [이름]. Teacher Michelle Here are some corrections for you: What a nice surprise! >>CorrectWe have the same religion!>>Correctyes, there is a reason we met!!^^ >>Yes, there is a reason why we met!!^^Thanks for god! I\'ll pray for you whenever I go to mass!^^>>Thanks to God! I\'ll pray for you whenever I go to mass!^^Anyway, I\'m sorry not to do my homework yesterday!>>Anyway, I\'m sorry not to have done my homework yesterday!Like I said, I had to go to the funeral and make a call of condolence.>>Like I said, I had to go to the funeral and for my condolences.I was with him almost all day..>>CorrectBecause he seemed so desperate, I could not just go back to home.>>Because he seemed so desperate, I could not just go back home.I think it is the biggest loss. I don\'t even want to think about it>>CorrectI think people visit museums for some resons.>>CorrectFirst of all, they can learn about history efficiently, by visiting history museums.>>CorrectFor example, when I was in high school, I was not interested in my history class. >>Correctbut, after visiting history museum, I could more enjoy my class.>>But, after visiting history museums, I could enjoy my class more.This is becuase something that I can see directly can be more memorable.>>CorrectSecond, they can enjoy their time there.>>Second, they can enjoy their time there.To be specific, there are other facilities such as a restaurant and a coffee shop in museums.>>Correctso, they could enjoy famous arts and eat food or coffee at the same time.>>So, they could enjoy famous arts, eat food or drink coffee at the same time.

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