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Hi, Lei
I'm glad to talk with you. How's the weather? Here is very weird weather. Hail was hammering down at last night being so cold, but now it's sunny so I was outside during the class. However I decided to examine the TOEIC test trying to check my english level. I have not ever applied IBT at once because I think TOEFL is hard for me now. I wish I will get good results.
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Hi Greg!
Yeah I know, climate is getting weird nowadays not only in Korea but globally. Maybe because of greenhouse effect. Well, I am glad that you decided to take TOEIC exams. I am confident that you’ll get a passing grade. Just try to be more assertive and outspoken and everything will be fine. Good luck!! See you tomorrow.
Lei J
Hi, LeiI'm glad to talk with you.
>>correct
How's the weather?
>>correct
Here is very weird weather.
>>Here, the weather is weird
Hail was hammering down at last night being so cold, but now it's sunny so I was outside during the class.
>>Hale was hammering down last night that’s why it’s so cold, but now it’s sunny, so I went outside when I had class with you
However I decided to examine the TOEIC test trying to check my english level.
>>Also, I decided to take TOEIC examination to check my English level
I have not ever applied IBT at once because I think TOEFL is hard for me now.
>>I never applied for IBT before because I think TOEFL is quite hard for my level
I wish I will get good results.
>>correct>>I wish to get good results (better)
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