hi
학생이 쓴 원문
have a good day~~~*^^*
강사 첨삭
Hello Emma,
We need to smile and laugh all the time because it can really make us feel good.
In addition, having a good heart will make us happy that is why we can laugh.
I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.
Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.
T.Jeny
1. Although I don’t agree with him, I think he is honest.
>>correct
2. I would like to go out, although it is a bit late.
>>correct
3. In spite of / despite the rain, we went out.
>>correct
4. She went on working, despite she was tired.
>>She went on working, though she was tired.
5. Though he is fat, he runs fast.
>>correct
6. She went on working, either could be used here the fact that she was tired.
> She went on working, despite the fact that she was tired.
7. Though I was angry, I kept quiet.
>>correct
8. Though / although it was a bit expensive, I decided to buy it.
>>correct
9. Though she is poor, she is happy.
>>correct
10. I managed to do it, despite he didn’t help me.
>> I managed to do it, though he didn’t help me.
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