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2022-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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Hi teacher Andrea! How did you know that I like zombies. I think I should do homework every single time. But after our class, I\'m exhausted : ( It\'s already a miracle for me to keep having our class every day. But i would like to say.. I will try my best..! After class Doing Dictaion all of our conversation is surely heplful for me but it takes so long time yet. I hope I can reduce the time soon so I can do homework! If you ask me how much you like zombies.. I have watched all of the movies about that even video games! What about you? I guess you like zombies too becuase it looks like we have a lot in common!

강사 첨삭

Hi Q!^^

I actually didn\'t have any idea that you like zombies. I recently watched the Netflix series, All of Us are Dead and I wanted to share my idea.

Good to know that you liked the topic.

Regarding your class performance, you are actually doing great.

You make sure to answer in a full sentence and asks question if you are not sure of what is being asked.

Ten minutes is very short and yet we still manage to answer the things needed.

I appreciate you putting an extra effort to learn the language.

I agree that we have a lot in common. (But not the part where you love exercising.. hahahha)

Teacher Andrea

Hi teacher Andrea!

>> Hi, Teacher Andrea!

How did you know that I like zombies.

>> How did you know that I like zombies?

I think I should do homework every single time.

>> I think I should do my homework every time.

But after our class, I\'m exhausted : (

>> Correct

It\'s already a miracle for me to keep having our class every day. But i would like to say.. I will try my best..!

>> It\'s already a miracle for me to keep having our class every day but I would like to say that I will try my best!

After class Doing Dictaion all of our conversation is surely heplful for me but it takes so long time yet.

>> Doing dictation of our conversation is surely helpful for me but it takes a lot of time.

I hope I can reduce the time soon so I can do homework!
>> Correct

If you ask me how much you like zombies.. I have watched all of the movies about that

>> If you\'ll asked me how much I like zombies, I have watched all zombie movies.

even video games

>> I even played video games!

What about you?

>> Correct

I guess you like zombies too becuase it looks like we have a lot in common!

>> I guess you like zombies too because it looks like we have a lot in common!

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