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Hellow! Andrea. It is always fun and exciting. I know that you can\'t believe that though. I just listened the record file. I was surprised that I sound so tired. I don\'t like people who has low confidence and voice but now that is me!! I should try to be more energitic from next class so you will not be down either.
My parents adopted a dog! She\'s name is bead in Korean. She is 3 years old. Actually I\' ve tried of having dogs when I was young. It was really hard. So now I think I can feed some fishes..I\'ve also tried of them It\'s much easier than feeding dogs. I love fishes as much as zombies. When I go to an lake. I can stay there all day looking fishes swiming freely. They make me relax. So If I have to take only one I would choose fishes!
You said you had surgery.
I could fianally get it during record file..
I hope you get much better soon and you will be! I believe your power. I knew it. Actually last class you said you like cheese burger. It sounds somewhat sad.. just kidding :)
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Hi Q!^^
My parents adopted a dog!
You said you had surgery.
>> Correct
I hope you get much better soon and you will be!
I never really had a pet.
I am scared with animals that have furs.
Dogs, cats, hamsters, and guinea pigs are examples of it.
I don\'t want their fur to touch my skin. haha
However, my niece has a pet fish. When they transferred to another house, her fishes syated in our house.
Now, I am the one looking after the fishes.
Betta fish are cool. You should check them.
Regarding my surgery, it happened last July. So I am okay now.
It was actually my gallbladder. It has been removed.
Teacher Andrea
Hellow! Andrea.
>> Hello, Andrea!
It is always fun and exciting.
>> I am a person who is always having fun and excited.
I know that you can\'t believe that though.
>> Correct
I just listened the record file. I was surprised that I sound so tired.
>> I just listened to the recorded file and I was surprised that I sounded tired.
I don\'t like people who has low confidence and voice but now that is me!!
>> I don\'t like people who have low self-confidence and soft voice, turns out that it is me!!
I should try to be more energitic from next class so you will not be down either.
>> I should try to be more energetic starting on our next class so you will not be down either.
>> I should try to be more energetic starting on our next class so you will not be down either.
My parents adopted a dog!
>> Correct
She\'s name is bead in Korean.
>> Her Korean name is Bead.
She is 3 years old.
>> Correct
Actually I\' ve tried of having dogs when I was young.
>> Correct
It was really hard.
>> Correct
So now I think I can feed some fishes..
>> So I thought I can feed some fish.
I\'ve also tried of them It\'s much easier than feeding dogs.
>> I also tried having fish and it\'s much easier than having dogs.
I love fishes as much as zombies.
>> Correct (hahaha)
When I go to an lake. I can stay there all day looking fishes swiming freely.
>> When I go to a lake, I can stay there all day just by looking at fishes swimming freely.
They make me relax. So If I have to take only one I would choose fishes!
>> They make me feel relaxed and if I could choose a pet, I would choose to have a fish.
>> They make me feel relaxed and if I could choose a pet, I would choose to have a fish.
You said you had surgery.
>> Correct
I could fianally get it during record file..
>>I was able to get it through the recorded file.
I hope you get much better soon and you will be!
>> Correct
I believe your power.
>> Correct
>> OR: I believe you are strong.
I knew it.
>> Correct
Actually last class you said you like cheese burger.
>> Correct
It sounds somewhat sad.. just kidding :) .
>> Correct (hahahaha)
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