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2012-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Evee

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To know about my interesting and aptitude is not easy and it is important. Many people change their jod in a short period. Because, people don't care about their interesting or strong point, when they looking for the job they consider about salary. Some people just don't know what is their strong point. During working, they realized the job isn't suit on them. For example, my sister want to be a flight attendant, but she doesn't like stduy other language. The skill can speak many language is necessary for being flight attendant. I think she has a good ability at art like fashion, drowing, decoration, etc. However, she doesn't accept my advice.

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Hi! A terrific Thursday to you. It is really important to know your interests, abilities and strengths so you\'ll end up doing the job you like. Know your interests and abilities so you will have no regrets later on. I am happy of your composition, you really did put your mind into it. Keep it up. T.Verna To know about my interesting and aptitude is not easy and it is important. >> To know about my interests and aptitude is not easy and it is important.Many people change their jod in a short period. >> Many people change their job in a short period of time.Because, people don\'t care about their interesting or strong point, when they looking for the job they consider about salary. >> Because, people don\'t care about their interests or strengths when looking for a job. They consider the salary.Some people just don\'t know what is their strong point. >> Correct. >> Some people just don\'t know what their strength is.During working, they realized the job isn\'t suit on them. >> When they are already working,they\'ll realize that the job they have isn\'t suited for them.For example, my sister want to be a flight attendant, but she doesn\'t like stduy other language. >> For example, my sister wants to be a flight attendant,but she doesn\'t like to study another language. >> For example, my sister wants to be a flight attendant,but she doesn\'t like to study other people\'s language.The skill can speak many language is necessary for being flight attendant. >> Having the skill to speak many languages is necessary for being a flight attendant. >> Having the skill to speak many languages is necessary to be a flight attendant. I think she has a good ability at art like fashion, drowing, decoration, etc. >> I think she has a talent in arts like fashion, drawing, decorating, etc. >> I think she has a talent in arts like fashion, drawing, designing, etc.However, she doesn\'t accept my advice. >> Correct. >> However, she doesn\'t listen to my advice.

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