Hi^^

2012-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Nowaday I feel tired better than before. My father are sick. I visit several times on my day off. I am not able to rest enough time. And My house contraction will be over by April. My husband and I try to fine new house. I think I always have busy reasons. Life is life...I am sorry about not preparing my class. but I like my class with you. And I am all the time waiting my class.^^ It seem like to feel exited on your annual flower festival. I want to see that parade. If I do possible I want to spend my summer holiday in your country. My task is... Music touched my mind. Music can fill silent air. Music can refrsh me. But I don't like crowd music. It meant to be I am older. How do I think the world without music?

강사 첨삭

It does seem like you are very busy all the time. I hope you get to find a nice house for you and your husband and hopefully your dad will fine soon. The streets will be very crowded this whole week here in our city because of the festival. Surely hope you\'d see the festival here too. Get a lot of rest if you can. It wouldn\'t be good if you\'re too tired all the time. Good health and have a nice day!     T. Aurora   Nowaday I feel tired better than before. >>Now a days, I feel more tired than before.My father are sick. >>My father is sick. I visit several times on my day off. >>I visited him several times on my day off.  I am not able to rest enough time. >>I wasn\'t able to have enough time to rest. And My house contraction will be over by April. >>My house contract will be over by April.  My husband and I try to fine new house. >>My husband and I will try to find a new house.  I think I always have busy reasons. >>I think I always have a lot of things to do.  Life is life...I am sorry about not preparing my class. >>Life is life. I am sorry about not preparing for our class.  but I like my class with you. And I am all the time waiting my class.^^>>But I like my class with you and I wait for it all the time.It seem like to feel exited on your annual flower festival. >>I feel excited for your annual Flower Festival.  I want to see that parade. >>Correct!  If I do possible I want to spend my summer holiday in your country.>>If it\'s possible, I\'d like to spend my summer holiday in your country.My task is... >>Here\'s my homework.Music touched my mind. >>Music touches my mind.  Music can fill silent air. >>Music can fill the silent air.  Music can refrsh me. >>Music can refresh me. But I don\'t like crowd music. >>But I don\'t like loud music. It meant to be I am older. >>It\'s probably so because I\'m getting older.   How do I think the world without music? >>I can\'t imagine the world without music.

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