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2010-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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I am going to tell you my weekend. Since I work in shifts , I can't rest even in the weekend. Weekend is just ordinary day to me. So I am going to tell you my holiday. During the holiday, I used to play sports like soccer or basketball. but I got a hurt on my leg 2 year ago when I rode a bicycle on a high hill. After that time, I usually stay at home in the weekend. Watching TV or surfing the internet is my main activities. I have a dream When I get a full recovery on my leg , I want to go hiking to mountain with my girlfriend. I hope that day will com soon

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Hi [이름].I guess you're really busy person because you don't usually get a weekend. I'm sorry to hear what had happen to your legs. You have to take care this time. As you told me,there's an operation who could help your legs go back to normal. I hope it will work for you so you could go back to your own activities.Nice meeting you! Have a safe weekend. SSee you on Monday!   LINA   I am going to tell you my weekend.>>I am going to tell you about my weekend.Since I work in shifts.>>Since I work on shiftsI can't rest even in the weekend.>>I can’t rest even on weekend.Weekend is just ordinary day to me.>>CorrectSo I am going to tell you my holiday.>>CorrectDuring the holiday, I used to play sports like soccer or basketball.>>Correctbut I got a hurt on my leg 2 year ago when I rode a bicycle on a high hill.>>But I got an accident and hurt my legs two years ago from riding a bicycle on a high hill. After that time, I usually stay at home in the weekend.>>Correct >>after that incident, I usually stay home during the weekend.Watching TV or surfing the internet is my main activities.>> Watching TV or surfing the internet is my main activitiesI have a dream >>Correct sentence.When I get a full recovery on my leg , >>When my legs are fully recovered. I want to go hiking to mountain with my girlfriend. >>Correct I hope that day will com soon >>correct >>Come  

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