Hi.

2010-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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I am going to tell you the reason why I couldn't attend the class yesterday. It was day off yesterday. and my shift was supposed to change from day to night. so I tried to adjust my self to a new shift. I went to bed at 4PM and set the alarm at 7PM When I woke up , I felt strange. Suddenly,I saw my watch. It was 11:30 PM. I set the alarm in a vibration mode not a ringing sound Sorry to skip my class. see you tonight.

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Hi [이름]. No need to be sorry I understad I know that you are as busy as a bee. take enough time to rest.Remember that health is very important more than anything else. I'm just here waiting.So I'm gonna see you tonight.   LINA   I am going to tell you the reason why I couldn't attend the class yesterday.>>CorrectIt was day off yesterday.>>It was my day off yesterday.and my shift was supposed to change from day to night.>>Correct >>And my shift was supposed to change dayshift to night.(Better~)so I tried to adjust my self to a new shift. >>Correct >>So,I tried adjusting myself on a new shift. (Better~)I went to bed at 4PM and set the alarm at 7PM>>CorrectWhen I woke up , I felt strange.>>CorrectSuddenly,I saw my watch.>>Suddenly, I looked at my watch.It was 11:30 PM. >>Correct I set the alarm in a vibration mode not a ringing sound>>I set my phone in vibration mode, without ringing sound.,Sorry to skip my class. see you tonight. >>Correct  

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