Hi.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am going to tell you the reason why I couldn't attend the class yesterday.
It was day off yesterday.
and my shift was supposed to change from day to night.
so I tried to adjust my self to a new shift.
I went to bed at 4PM and set the alarm at 7PM
When I woke up , I felt strange.
Suddenly,I saw my watch.
It was 11:30 PM. I set the alarm in a vibration mode not a ringing sound
Sorry to skip my class. see you tonight.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. No need to be sorry I understad I know that you are as busy as a bee. take enough time to rest.Remember that health is very important more than anything else. I'm just here waiting.So I'm gonna see you tonight.
LINA
I am going to tell you the reason why I couldn't attend the class yesterday.>>CorrectIt was day off yesterday.>>It was my day off yesterday.and my shift was supposed to change from day to night.>>Correct
>>And my shift was supposed to change dayshift to night.(Better~)so I tried to adjust my self to a new shift.
>>Correct
>>So,I tried adjusting myself on a new shift. (Better~)I went to bed at 4PM and set the alarm at 7PM>>CorrectWhen I woke up , I felt strange.>>CorrectSuddenly,I saw my watch.>>Suddenly, I looked at my watch.It was 11:30 PM.
>>Correct
I set the alarm in a vibration mode not a ringing sound>>I set my phone in vibration mode, without ringing sound.,Sorry to skip my class. see you tonight.
>>Correct
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