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2012-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Judy

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Hi Judy (sorry I'm not sure your name:-( This is [이름]. I was so happy to talk to you.Becuz the textbook is not interesting for me....haha but our topic about your boyfriend who not handsome but good is very interesting. I really want to meet a perfact man as soon as possible. HaHa and I am naver "WangDda."kkkk anyway see you later.~Thank you~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending a nice composition. It's okay! Don't worry about that. You'll meet the man of your dreams soon and you'll never know when he will come. Have a great day! T. Judy Here are my corrections:   Hi Judy (sorry I\'m not sure your name:-( >> Hi Judy! (I'm sorry because I\'m not sure of your name:-()This is [이름]. >>Correct I was so happy to talk to you. >> I was so happy to talk with you. Becuz the textbook is not interesting for me....haha but our topic about your boyfriend who not handsome but good is very interesting. >> Because the textbook is not interesting for me....haha! But our topic about your boyfriend, who's not handsome but good is very interesting. I really want to meet a perfact man as soon as possible. >> I really want to meet a perfect man as soon as possible. HaHa and I am naver \"WangDda.\"kkkk >> Haha! I am never \"WangDda.\" Kkkk!anyway see you later. >> Anyway, see you later! ~Thank you~ >>Correct

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