hi ~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Judy (sorry I'm not sure your name:-(
This is [이름]. I was so happy to talk to you.Becuz the textbook is not interesting for me....haha but our topic about your boyfriend who not handsome but good is very interesting. I really want to meet a perfact man as soon as possible. HaHa and I am naver "WangDda."kkkk
anyway see you later.~Thank you~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending a nice composition. It's okay! Don't worry about that. You'll meet the man of your dreams soon and you'll never know when he will come. Have a great day!
T. Judy
Here are my corrections:
Hi Judy (sorry I\'m not sure your name:-(
>> Hi Judy! (I'm sorry because I\'m not sure of your name:-()This is [이름].
>>Correct
I was so happy to talk to you.
>> I was so happy to talk with you.
Becuz the textbook is not interesting for me....haha but our topic about your boyfriend who not handsome but good is very interesting.
>> Because the textbook is not interesting for me....haha! But our topic about your boyfriend, who's not handsome but good is very interesting.
I really want to meet a perfact man as soon as possible.
>> I really want to meet a perfect man as soon as possible.
HaHa and I am naver \"WangDda.\"kkkk
>> Haha! I am never \"WangDda.\" Kkkk!anyway see you later.
>> Anyway, see you later!
~Thank you~
>>Correct
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