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2010-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Good afternoon. Yesterday, Our phone line suddenly disconneted. That time, I don't know that, so I taked alone a few seconds. that situation is very sad. and I want to change our class style. Free talking is not bad. but I think that I don't know many word and I don't make completely sentence. so today or tomorrow I want to start textbook. but this book is so easy to me. You recommend other book or internet book, please. See you evening at 9:00

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], I’m sorry about what happened last night, I also wanted to call you back but my schedule is really fully booked so I have students waiting for me. I decided to explain to you tonight. For your guidebook can you please download Senior Talking 2-1 from our website? If you need some assistance please feel free to call my manager.  This is only our guide so we can have a smooth conversation. I’m really sorry about what happened. I’ll see you tonight.   Stay safe, Connie   Good afternoon.Yesterday, Our phone line suddenly disconneted. >> Yesterday, our conversation was suddenly disconnected.That time, I don't know that, so I taked alone a few seconds. >> That time, I don’t know that, so I talked alone for a few seconds.that situation is very sad. >> That situation is very sad.andI want to change our class style. >> I want to change our class style.Free talking is not bad. but I think that I don't know many word and I don't make completely sentence.>> Free talking is not bad, but I think I don’t know many words and I can’t make complete sentences.so today or tomorrow I want to start textbook. >> SO today or tomorrow, I want to start a textbook.but this book is so easy to me. >> However, this book is easy for me.You recommend other book or internet book, please. >> Can you recommend other books or internet books, please?See you evening at 9:00

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