hi
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon.
Yesterday, Our phone line suddenly disconneted.
That time, I don't know that, so I taked alone a few seconds.
that situation is very sad.
and
I want to change our class style.
Free talking is not bad. but I think that I don't know many word and I don't make completely sentence.
so today or tomorrow I want to start textbook.
but this book is so easy to me.
You recommend other book or internet book, please.
See you evening at 9:00
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I’m sorry about what happened last night, I also wanted to call you back but my schedule is really fully booked so I have students waiting for me. I decided to explain to you tonight. For your guidebook can you please download Senior Talking 2-1 from our website? If you need some assistance please feel free to call my manager. This is only our guide so we can have a smooth conversation. I’m really sorry about what happened.
I’ll see you tonight.
Stay safe,
Connie
Good afternoon.Yesterday, Our phone line suddenly disconneted.
>> Yesterday, our conversation was suddenly disconnected.That time, I don't know that, so I taked alone a few seconds.
>> That time, I don’t know that, so I talked alone for a few seconds.that situation is very sad.
>> That situation is very sad.andI want to change our class style.
>> I want to change our class style.Free talking is not bad. but I think that I don't know many word and I don't make completely sentence.>> Free talking is not bad, but I think I don’t know many words and I can’t make complete sentences.so today or tomorrow I want to start textbook.
>> SO today or tomorrow, I want to start a textbook.but this book is so easy to me.
>> However, this book is easy for me.You recommend other book or internet book, please.
>> Can you recommend other books or internet books, please?See you evening at 9:00
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