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Dear [Name],I am emailing you to appreciate your kind offer to stay at your house during my business trip in Sydney. Thanks to you, I could stay comfortable for three nights without any concerns about the accomodation. Fortunately, I made a contract with the manager at ABC company, and I finally achieved the purpose of this trip. As a result of this, I may get a chance for the promotion. However, I was so shocked when I got back home because I realised that the file case was missing which contains the contract and whole documents related to that business meeting. I was desperately looking for the bunch of files, mixing my luggage up. All of sudden, I thought that I might leave the briefcase in your room. If you don't mind, could you please see if my important documents are in your room as soon as possible? If possible, plese send those via express airmail and I am happy to pay for the costs incurred.Plese don't forget to write your account number and my address is below:~~

Hi [이름]! You have a good composition here. I really like the way you construct your sentences. They are very precise. The only mistake that you have is the spelling of some words. May be you are just in a hurry to do your composition. I hope you'll find your important files as soon as possible! T. Dianne Dear [Name], >>CORRECT I am emailing you to appreciate your kind offer to stay at your house during my business trip in Sydney. >>CORRECT Thanks to you, I could stay comfortable for three nights without any concerns about the accomodation. >> Thanks to you, I could stay comfortable for three nights without any concerns about the accommodation. Fortunately, I made a contract with the manager at ABC company, and I finally achieved the purpose of this trip. >>Fortunately, I made a contract with the manager at ABC Company, and I finally achieved the purpose of this trip. As a result of this, I may get a chance for the promotion. >>CORRECT OR >>As a result of this, I may get a chance to be promoted.However, I was so shocked when I got back home because I realised that the file case was missing which contains the contract and whole documents related to that business meeting. >> However, I was so shocked when I got back home because I realized that the file case was missing which contains the contract and the whole documents related to that business meeting. I was desperately looking for the bunch of files, mixing my luggage up. >>CORRECT All of sudden, I thought that I might leave the briefcase in your room. >>All of a sudden, I thought that I might left the briefcase in your room.If you don\'t mind, could you please see if my important documents are in your room as soon as possible? >>CORRECT OR >>If you don\'t mind, could I ask a favor to please look for my important documents in your room as soon as possible? If possible, plese send those via express airmail and I am happy to pay for the costs incurred. >>If possible, could you please send those files via express airmail and I am willing to pay for the costs incurred. Plese don\'t forget to write your account number and my address is below:~~ >>Please don\'t forget to write your account number and my address is below: