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I am writing this to complain about several matters that I exprienced during my trip with ABC Agency. First of all, I booked my trip with your company because you guarenteed that I would have a chance to look around "Old Castle" in China. Since I am studying history, the advertisement of "Old Castle" was attractive enough for me to pay big money for a trip with your agency. Howevery, when I arrived at China, the tour guide told me that visiting 'Old Castle' has been cancelled. He alternatively suggested me to visit a crowded shopping center in the middle of the city. I was not only disappointed with the chage of schedule, but also upset at the attitude of that tour guide. He was forcing tourists to buy expensive suveniours, leaving us alone in the shopping center more than 2 hours.I am suspecting that he may get commissions from the shop owners whenever tourists purchase products there.For the sake of your business, I strongly request you reprimand that corrupted guide.Further,

Hi [이름]! Wow! Nice work again! I think you can create novels because you are good at making up stories kkk. Way to go! See you later! Your sentences were almost perfect, you just need to be more careful with the spelling of the words. T. Dianne I am writing this to complain about several matters that I exprienced during my trip with ABC Agency. >>I am writing this to complain about several matters that I experienced during my trip with ABC Agency. >>I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction about several matters that I experienced during my trip with ABC Agency. First of all, I booked my trip with your company because you guarenteed that I would have a chance to look around \"Old Castle\" in China. >>First of all, I booked my trip with your company because you guaranteed that I would have a chance to look around the \"Old Castle\" in China. Since I am studying history, the advertisement of \"Old Castle\" was attractive enough for me to pay big money for a trip with your agency. >>CORRECT Howevery, when I arrived at China, the tour guide told me that visiting \'Old Castle\' has been cancelled. >>However, when I arrived at China, the tour guide told me that visiting the Old Castle has been cancelled. He alternatively suggested me to visit a crowded shopping center in the middle of the city. >>CORRECT I was not only disappointed with the chage of schedule, but also upset at the attitude of that tour guide. >>I was not only disappointed with the change of schedule but also upset at the attitude of that tour guide. OR >>I was not only disappointed with the change of schedule but also I was upset with the attitude of the tour guide. He was forcing tourists to buy expensive suveniours, leaving us alone in the shopping center more than 2 hours. >>He was forcing tourists to buy expensive souvenirs then leaving us alone in the shopping center more than 2 hours. I am suspecting that he may get commissions from the shop owners whenever tourists purchase products there. >>CORRECT For the sake of your business, I strongly request you reprimand that corrupted guide.Further, >>For the sake of your business, I strongly request that you further reprimand that corrupted guide.