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In recent years,there has been increasing number of students who choose to study abroad. This is partly because there are many opportunities of scholarship for students who apply foreign universities. Moreover, the influence of masmedia affects students to have interest in another countries. It is true that studying overseas has many advantages. First of all, we can make friends from all over the world. By interacting each other, we can learn from those people who have totally different cultural background. In addition, we can attend a wider and diverse range of courses in foreign universities than those in our own countries. However,studying overseas also has its drawback. Homesick is the main problem that most students living abroad have. On average, students spend at least four years. This long period sometimes makes students feel depressed because they miss their familiy and friends. Further,even though studentys can cover their tuition by scholarship,living fee is expensive

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