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There has been controversies among people regarding the necessity of capital punishment. Some say death penalty should be abolished because of its cruelty. However, others still emphasize that it plays a role of deterrence, considering the increasing rate of cruel crimes. I believe that capital punishment is crucial for the society for the following reasons. First, according to the researches conducted by a professor at C university, the cruel crime rates are hiher in the states which don't have death penalty than in the states which do have death penalty. In a situation where people are scared at serious crimiinals walking around everywhere, this research shows that capital punishment should be implemented as many places as possible in order to prevent the potential criminals from committing serious crimes to the public.

Hi [이름]! I'm impressed again with your composition again! It's been awhile right? Although there were misspelled words, the message is still delivered well. Keep it up! Have a good night! T. Dianne There has been controversies among people regarding the necessity of capital punishment. >>There have been controversies among people regarding the necessity of capital punishment. OR >>There has been a controversy among people regarding the necessity of capital punishment. Some say death penalty should be abolished because of its cruelty. >>CORRECT However, others still emphasize that it plays a role of deterrence, considering the increasing rate of cruel crimes. >>CORRECT I believe that capital punishment is crucial for the society for the following reasons. >>I believe that capital punishment is crucial for the society for the following reasons: First, according to the researches conducted by a professor at C university, the cruel crime rates are hiher in the states which don\'t have death penalty than in the states which do have death penalty. >>First, base on the researches conducted by a professor at C university, the cruel crime rates are higher in the states which don\'t have death penalty than in the states which do have death penalty. In a situation where people are scared at serious crimiinals walking around everywhere, this research shows that capital punishment should be implemented as many places as possible in order to prevent the potential criminals from committing serious crimes to the public. >>In a situation where people are scared of serious criminals walking around everywhere, this research shows that capital punishment should be implemented as many places as possible in order to prevent the potential criminals from committing serious crimes to the public.