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2012-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi, Alice My first class was so interesting. I was happy to talk to you Actually, I felt little dizzy after my yoga class as I told you before your call, but I got much better after talking to you. Thank you very much! I hope we have good time during classes for one month. I expect my speaking skill will be improved. See you tomorrow, Alice.

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Hi there [이름]! I am very happy to speak with you too. ^^ It is my pleasure to finally meet you. I hope that we will have a lot more interesting classes in the future. I know we would because you have so much enthusiasm. :) I also hope that with us working hand-in-hand, we can improve your English skills. ^^ Thank you very much for your time tonight, [이름]. Have an awesome sleep tonight! ^^ Enthusiastically, ~Teacher Alice Hi, Alice >> Hi Alice.My first class was so interesting. >> Correct!I was happy to talk to you >> Correct! *Just do not forget to end your sentence with a period (.).Actually, I felt little dizzy after my yoga class as I told you before your call, but I got much better after talking to you. >> Actually, I felt a little dizzy after my yoga class as I told you before during your call, but I got much better after talking to you. *Thank you. I\'m glad to hear that. :)Thank you very much!>> Correct!I hope we have good time during classes for one month. >> I hope we\'ll have a good time during our classes for the rest of the month.I expect my speaking skill will be improved.>> Correct! *Sure will!See you tomorrow, Alice. >> Correct!

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