HI~!
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow. Today,I taked first my class. Frankly, it was a little difficult to me because there aren't nonvocal communication like bodylanguages. Somebody talk me it will help to study english more than other ways. So, I will believe them.
My teacher is Cam. She is very brighten and kind, and laughs a lot. So the class is very good.
Anyway, today's class was over. The time was gone when I open my eyes(?)kkk
I gonna watch the TV Drama, "24hours" which make me couch potato.
bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear [이름], thank you so much for having a wonderful class with me this afternoon..:)
I appreciate your eagerness to study baby and don\'t worry, Im more than willing to help you improve your English skill even without using body languages.
You know my you are very good, you just have to believe in yourself that you can speak like how I believe in you..^^
Anyway, watching English TV series will be a very good help for you my dear, good job..:)
Talk to you again tomorrow my dear [이름] and take care always..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Wow. Today,I taked first my class.
>>Wow Today I had my first class.
>>Today I took my first class..TOOK is the past tense of TAKE..^^
Frankly, it was a little difficult to me because there aren\'t nonvocal communication like bodylanguages.
>>correct
Somebody talk me it will help to study english more than other ways. So, I will believe them.>>SOmebody told me that it will be a very big help for me to study English and I believed them.My teacher is Cam.
>>correct
She is very brighten and kind, and laughs a lot. So the class is very good.>>She is very bright, kind and laughs a lot so the class is very good...THANK YOU so much my dear [이름]..:*Anyway, today\'s class was over.
>>correct
The time was gone when I open my eyes(?)kkk>>Time flies when I opened my eyes..:DI gonna watch the TV Drama, \"24hours\" which make me couch potato.
>>I\'m gonna watch the TV drama entitled 24 Hours which will make me acouch potatoagain.,VERY GOOD use of IDIOMS my dear, two thumbs up for you!bye.
>>correct
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