Hi~~

2012-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

학생이 쓴 원문

Leny~~ I was impressed after seeing you. You look so intelligent and beautiful...smart. Because the first time... Everything was not flowed well. I dont want your time is wasted. You have to stop when our class is time over. Aza~Aza(in korean)...아자~아자 I hope we will have a good communication for a long time. Have a nice weekend~~~~

강사 첨삭

Hooray Ms. [Name]! Whew! Our class earlier was a blow to me because I was completely surprised when you suddenly appeared in my monitor.^_^ I apologize that I looked so pathetic the whole time. But anyway don\'t worry because I promise that our next class will be a different one. I wish you have a very good weekend too. Also, thanks for sending me a massage this early. Have a very magnificent weekend! And oh yes, I would like to say you look so young and beautiful too, Ma\'am! Keep smiling! ---LENY--- Here are my corrections for you: I was impressed after seeing you. >>>Correct! >>>I am impressed the first time I saw you. >>>I was impress when I saw you.You look so intelligent and beautiful...smart. >>>You look so intelligent, beautiful, and smart. Because the first time... >>>Because our conversation didn\'t go well the firs time.Everything was not flowed well.>>>Everything didn\'t flow well. >>>Everything went bad. I dont want your time is wasted.>>>I don\'t want to waste your time. >>>I don\'t want wasting your time. You have to stop when our class is time over.>>>You should say stop when our class time is over. >>>You have to say stop when our time is up. Aza~Aza(in korean)...아자~아자 >>>Saying stop in Korean is aza. >>>You can say aza. That\'s stop in Korean.I hope we will have a good communication for a long time. >>>Correct! >>>I hope that we will communicate well for a long time.Have a nice weekend~~~~ >>>Correct!

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