Hi~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Leny~~
I was impressed after seeing you.
You look so intelligent and beautiful...smart.
Because the first time...
Everything was not flowed well.
I dont want your time is wasted.
You have to stop when our class is time over.
Aza~Aza(in korean)...아자~아자
I hope we will have a good communication for a long time.
Have a nice weekend~~~~
강사 첨삭
Hooray Ms. [Name]!
Whew! Our class earlier was a blow to me because I was completely surprised when you suddenly appeared in my monitor.^_^ I apologize that I looked so pathetic the whole time. But anyway don\'t worry because I promise that our next class will be a different one. I wish you have a very good weekend too. Also, thanks for sending me a massage this early. Have a very magnificent weekend! And oh yes, I would like to say you look so young and beautiful too, Ma\'am! Keep smiling!
---LENY---
Here are my corrections for you:
I was impressed after seeing you.
>>>Correct!
>>>I am impressed the first time I saw you.
>>>I was impress when I saw you.You look so intelligent and beautiful...smart.
>>>You look so intelligent, beautiful, and smart.
Because the first time...
>>>Because our conversation didn\'t go well the firs time.Everything was not flowed well.>>>Everything didn\'t flow well.
>>>Everything went bad.
I dont want your time is wasted.>>>I don\'t want to waste your time.
>>>I don\'t want wasting your time.
You have to stop when our class is time over.>>>You should say stop when our class time is over.
>>>You have to say stop when our time is up.
Aza~Aza(in korean)...아자~아자
>>>Saying stop in Korean is aza.
>>>You can say aza. That\'s stop in Korean.I hope we will have a good communication for a long time.
>>>Correct!
>>>I hope that we will communicate well for a long time.Have a nice weekend~~~~
>>>Correct!
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