Hi!!

2012-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Dear [Name], I think trust is the first secret of success. Trust are particularly important in relationships. Thus It is important to make a good impression on others to get trust. That is a manner for my life. So, see you later. I’ll wait for your call.

강사 첨삭

Hi J! Thanks for doing your homework. You ready made it. WOW! I\'ll see you in class later. Very good work! ~Teacher Alice Dear [Name], >> Correct!I think trust is the first secret of success. >> Correct!Trust are particularly important in relationships. >> Trust is particularly importnat in every realtionship.Thus It is important to make a good impression on others to get trust. >> Thus It is important to make a good impression to others to get trust.That is a manner for my life. >> Correct!

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