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2010-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 BARTE

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hi Mary? I'm Tom I am so tired that I can not anything today but I went to health culb, because of summer I will go to beach with friends how about you? what is your summer plan? Is Philippines hot? weather of Korea is so hot I thank you for teaching me I gain confidence^^ thank you Mary good bye

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Hi, Tom! It’s my pleasure to teach you...It’s rainy season here in the Philippines. Hope you will have a good time with your friends. Take good care of yourself! See you!   I'm Tom. >correct!!I am so tired that I can not anything todaybut I went to health culb, because of summer. >I’m so tired that I can’t do anything today so I decided to go to health club since it is summer. I will go to beach with friends > I will go to the beach with friends.how about you? >correct!! what is your summer plan? >correct!! Is Philippines hot? weather of Korea is so hot >Is it hot there in the Philippines? >Weather here in Korea is so hot. I thank you for teaching me >Thank you for teaching me. I gain confidence^^ >I gained confidence. thank you Mary >correct!! good bye >correct!!

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