hi
학생이 쓴 원문
hi Mary?
I'm Tom
I am so tired that I can not anything today
but I went to health culb, because of summer
I will go to beach with friends
how about you?
what is your summer plan?
Is Philippines hot? weather of Korea is so hot
I thank you for teaching me
I gain confidence^^
thank you Mary
good bye
강사 첨삭
Hi, Tom! It’s my pleasure to teach you...It’s rainy season here in the Philippines. Hope you will have a good time with your friends. Take good care of yourself! See you!
I'm Tom.
>correct!!I am so tired that I can not anything todaybut I went to health culb, because of summer.
>I’m so tired that I can’t do anything today so I decided to go to health club since it is summer. I will go to beach with friends
> I will go to the beach with friends.how about you?
>correct!!
what is your summer plan?
>correct!!
Is Philippines hot? weather of Korea is so hot
>Is it hot there in the Philippines?
>Weather here in Korea is so hot.
I thank you for teaching me
>Thank you for teaching me.
I gain confidence^^
>I gained confidence.
thank you Mary
>correct!!
good bye
>correct!!
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