Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you very much for your composition. Thank you as well for making me better understand the difference. Hahahaha Anyway, I think I have to learn how to play SAGU, too. However, I don't think there is a place for me to do that here in the Philippines. Again, thank you very much, and have a great day! See you!
-Louise-
Hi, Louis.
>> Correct.
>> Hi, Louise.
Long time no writing.
>> Correct.
>> It's been a long time since I last wrote to you.
I\'m wringting about billard table which was our point today.
>> I\'m writing about the billiard table which was our point today.
Actually, In korea, We have tables such as you mentioned that have pocket.
>> Actually, in Korea, we have tables such as what you mentioned that have holes.
Women usually play on the pocket tables and we call it pocket ball, of course, man also can play pocket ball.
>> Women usually play on the pocket tables and we call it pocket ball, and, of course, man also can play that.
But, in korea, man preper \"SAGU\" it is kind of carom.
>> But, in Korea, men prefer \"SAGU\" which is a kind of carom.
It only exits in korea.
>> It only exists in Korea.
There are four balls on the table.
>> Correct.
Two of them are red and another one is white and the rest one is yellow.
>> Two of them are red, another one is white and the last one is yellow.
The first player hit the white ball using cue.
>> The first player hits the white ball using the cue.
If the white ball touch the two of red balls he will get the point and he can play continually, but the white ball touch the only one red ball then no point and turn will be over other player, he will lose point if the white ball touch the yellow ball anyway and turn will be over other player.
>> If the white ball touches the two red balls, he will get a point and he can play continually. However, if the white ball touches just one red ball, there will be no point and turn will be given to the other player. He will lose a point if the white ball touches the yellow ball.
Likewise, other player play same as above but using yellow ball.
>> Likewise, the other player will play the same as mentioned above but he will be using the yellow ball.
We play \"SAMGU\" also.
>> Correct.
>> We play also \"SAMGU\".
It use only three balls and have to touch two other balls to get the point by cushion.
>> It uses only three balls and has to touch the two other balls to get a point by cushion.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.