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2012-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I'm sorry. I checked your feedback just now. I was very busy on Thursday because my uncle's family who live in Indanasia came Korea. My cousins wanted to go Lotte World(amusementpark). So we met at there. I spent time with my uncle's family and watched movie with my another cousin. By the way, I'd like to answer your questions. I studied english first when I was elementary school. I was average but I liked english. Of course now. I studied english in Korean style. Korean style means like this...Umm...study grammer, reading and memorize. Actually, I studied english for test. Anyway, I become poor at speaking english even if I learned english for "10 years". So I decided to study speaking persistently. Like you said, I have effort to not committing grammatical errors while talking. I'd like to learn from you very much. Let's have close relations in study!!! Bye~

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! You are such a responsible student! Despite having a long day, you still made it a point to answer your homework. Keep up the good work! I find you really interesting. I am looking forward to having interactive classes with you! Take care and have a happy weekend! T. JanE ^^ I\'m sorry. >> Correct I checked your feedback just now.>> Correct I was very busy on Thursday because my uncle\'s family who live in Indanasia came Korea. >> I was very busy yesterday because my uncle and his family who live in Indonesia came to Korea.My cousins wanted to go Lotte World(amusementpark).>> My cousins wanted to go to Lotte World.So we met at there. >> So we met there. I spent time with my uncle\'s family and watched movie with my another cousin. >> I spent time with my uncle\'s family and I watched a movie with another cousin.By the way, I\'d like to answer your questions. >> Correct I studied english first when I was elementary school.>> The first time I studioed English was when I was in elementary school.I was average but I liked english. Of course now.>> I wasn\'t so good but I liked English, especially now.I studied english in Korean style. >> Correct Korean style means like this...Umm...study grammer, reading and memorize.>> Korean style means studying grammar, reading, and memorizing.Actually, I studied english for test.>> Actually, I studied English for a test.Anyway, I become poor at speaking english even if I learned english for \"10 years\".>> Anyway, I am poor at speaking English even if I have been studying English for 10 years now.So I decided to study speaking persistently.>> So I decided to improve my speaking skill persistently.Like you said, I have effort to not committing grammatical errors while talking.>> Like what you said, I make an effort not to commit grammatical errors when speaking.I\'d like to learn from you very much. >> Correct Let\'s have close relations in study!!! Bye~ >> Let\'s have a close relationship in studying. Bye~

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