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I'm again:) It might be bother thing for you that correcting two compositions in a day, but I should practice making sentences in English. Please understand. haha
Today, I watched a another movie entiltled "Limitless" at home. This movie is a sort of holliwood action movie unlike "Take This Waltz" and the story is pretty interesting. It's about a drug that can make people utilize oneself's brain a one hundred percent. With this pills, a main character does everything that he wants to do. Isn't the meterial interesting? I think the meterial comes from a fact that people utilize their brain only 20 percent.
There are some brutal scenes during the movie and I watched it alone, I was a little surprised. I think the movie is also pretty well made. You know, when we have nothing to do or we are bored, watching this kind of movie is the best way of killing time.
I already wrote three compositions about movie, I felt like an reviewer. kkk
Have a good night, bye~
강사 첨삭
I\'ve seen that movie too a long time ago. And yes, I found it interesting and scary too if a drug will be developed that will enable us to use 100% of our brain. There is probably a reason why our brain usage is limited. But I wouldn\'t mind becoming just a little bit smarter than many other people . I don\'t mind checking your homeworks Eva. So keep it coming. :)
T. Aurora
I\'m again:)
>>It\'s me again.
It might be bother thing for you that correcting two compositions in a day, but I should practice making sentences in English.
>>It might be bothersome for you to correct two compositions in a day, but I should practice making sentences in English.
Please understand. haha>>Correct!Today, I watched a another movie entiltled \"Limitless\" at home.
>>Today, I watched another movie entitled \"Limitless\" at home.
This movie is a sort of holliwood action movie unlike \"Take This Waltz\" and the story is pretty interesting.
>>This movie is sort of like a hollywood action movie unline \"Take this Waltz\" and the story is pretty interesting.
It\'s about a drug that can make people utilize oneself\'s brain a one hundred percent.
>>It\'s about a drug that can make people utilize their brain one hundred percent.
With this pills, a main character does everything that he wants to do.
>>With this pills, the main character was able to do everything he wants to do.
Isn\'t the meterial interesting?
>>Isn\'t the material interesting?
I think the meterial comes from a fact that people utilize their brain only 20 percent.
>>I think the material came from the fact that people utilize only 20 percent of their brain.There are some brutal scenes during the movie and I watched it alone, I was a little surprised.
>>There were some brutal scenes during the movie and I watched it alone so I was a little suprised.
I think the movie is also pretty well made.
>>Correct!
You know, when we have nothing to do or we are bored, watching this kind of movie is the best way of killing time.>>You know, when we have nothing to do or we are bored, watching this kind of movies is the best way to kill time.I already wrote three compositions about movie, I felt like an reviewer. kkk>>I already wrote three compositions about movies. I felt like it\'s a review.Have a good night, bye~
>>Correct!
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