HI
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm sorry I'm late.
MY name is [이름]
초록 is english means green.
but I dont like 'Princess Fiona' !!! lollollol
I'm 23years old.
I want to speak English well like you in this class. Fluently!!!
I need to help you~.
so you are vioce beautiful^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! It\'s good to receive one from you for the first time. I hope that you will make it a habit to write a composition for me. I will be very glad to give you the necessary corrections. Take care and have a wonderful day!
T. JanE ^^
I\'m sorry I\'m late.
>> Correct My name is [이름] >> Correct 초록 is english means green.>> ___ means green in English.But I dont like \'Princess Fiona\' !!! lollollol>> Correct I\'m 23 years old.>> Correct I want to speak English well like you in this class. Fluently!!!>> Correct I need to help you~.>> I need your help.so you are vioce beautiful^^
>> You have a beautiful voice.
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