HI

2013-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm sorry I'm late. MY name is [이름] 초록 is english means green. but I dont like 'Princess Fiona' !!! lollollol I'm 23years old. I want to speak English well like you in this class. Fluently!!! I need to help you~. so you are vioce beautiful^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! It\'s good to receive one from you for the first time. I hope that you will make it a habit to write a composition for me. I will be very glad to give you the necessary corrections. Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ I\'m sorry I\'m late. >> Correct My name is [이름] >> Correct 초록 is english means green.>> ___ means green in English.But I dont like \'Princess Fiona\' !!! lollollol>> Correct I\'m 23 years old.>> Correct I want to speak English well like you in this class. Fluently!!!>> Correct I need to help you~.>> I need your help.so you are vioce beautiful^^ >> You have a beautiful voice.

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