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Hi, my teacher. I`m [이름] you know. It's Friday. It's time to take a rest upon leavning my office at 5:00pm. What's gonna do this weekend? I`m going to the OakBalley snow park to slide over the snow in a sleight with my girl friend on Sunday. We're going there by taking suttle bus which takes us the OakBalley snow park, which is free of charge. It coast will be discounted at 50% by accepting a recommend for the friend of KaKao Talk related to the OakBalley. It seems to be cheaper than that I can buy a slope coupon dropped down at 50% at the rentalshop near that snow park. So, we're gonna take the first thing that give us 50% disccount. I'm always enjoying sliding over the snow board. I used to go to any snow park where I could get season pass each year. I've been to OakBalley, Hi-one, and Gonjiam resort for enjoying that. We're gonna come to each home to take a rest because we have to go to work at each department building following enjoying that. I hope you to really enjoy this weekend. It's Friday. It's time to take a rest upon leavning my office at 5:00pm. What's gonna do

Hi there! :) I read your composition and I really enjoyed reading your plan for this weekend. I wrote down my corrections for you to analyze. :) Keep up the good work! Talk to you soon and take care! T. Aurora Hi, my teacher. I`m [이름] you know.>>Hi my teacher! I\'m [이름], you know. OR: You know I\'m [이름].It\'s Friday. It\'s time to take a rest upon leavning my office at 5:00pm.>>It\'s Friday, it\'s time to take a rest upon leaving my office at 5:00 pm.What\'s gonna do this weekend? I`m going to the OakBalley snow park to slide over the snow in a sleight with my girl friend on Sunday. >>What will you do this weekend?I\'m going to the OakBalley snow park to slide over the snow in a sleight with my girl friend on Sunday. We\'re going there by taking suttle bus which takes us the OakBalley snow park, which is free of charge.>>We\'re going there by taking a shuttle bus which is free of charge.It coast will be discounted at 50% by accepting a recommend for the friend of KaKao Talk related to the OakBalley.>>DID YOU MEAN: The cost will be 50% discounted by accepting a recommendation from Kakao Talk who is related to OakBalley.It seems to be cheaper than that I can buy a slope coupon dropped down at 50% at the rentalshop near that snow park.>>DID YOU MEAN: It seems to be cheaper than the 50% discounted slope coupon which I can buy at the rental shop near that snow park.So, we\'re gonna take the first thing that give us 50% disccount.>>Correct!I\'m always enjoying sliding over the snow board. >>I always enjoy sliding over the snow board. I used to go to any snow park where I could get season pass each year.>>Correct!I\'ve been to OakBalley, Hi-one, and Gonjiam resort for enjoying that.>>Correct!We\'re gonna come to each home to take a rest because we have to go to work at each department building following enjoying that.>>DID YOU MEAN: After that, we have to come home to take a rest because we have to go to work in our department building.I hope you to really enjoy this weekend.>>Correct!It\'s Friday. It\'s time to take a rest upon leavning my office at 5:00pm.>>It\'s Friday, it\'s time to take a rest upon leaving my office at 5:00 pm.What\'s gonna do >>What will you do this weekend?