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2013-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Sorry. You give homework to me. It is T-T difficult. I will study about it for weekend. anyway. 1. Where are you now? 2. I am in my domitory. 3. If you say. 4. What did you do today? 5. I am very tired today 6. Why? 7. I study to hard. 8. English? 9. Do you know computer coding? 10. Yes, I know. 11. Is it difficult? 12. Yes, It is very difficult. 13. I hard to study computer coding but I like many to think. 14. I always play coding. 15. Do you enjoy computer coding? 16. When did you usually practice? 17. I am new employee so i don'y have time to excrise. 18. For you. 19. Do you feel tried? When you play sport. 20. I have Played table tennis for 4 hours today but I am not tired because i feel enjoy when i play sport. 21. Say again I can play table tennis for 4 hours after playing i feel tired. 22. I will go to do my homework. 23 See you again nuna ^^ Good night.

강사 첨삭

Hello Bonggyu, Here are my corrections and I hope you have time to read them. See you! T.Sheela Sorry. You give homework to me. It is T-T difficult.>> Sorry but the homework you gave me is difficult.I will study about it for weekend.>> I will study on weekend.anyway.>>Anyway, here is the result of our conversation.1. Where are you now?>> Correct!2. I am in my domitory.>>I am in the dormitory.3. If you say.>> If you say that...4. What did you do today?>>Correct!5. I am very tired today.>> Correct!6. Why?>>Correct!>>OR: Why are you tired?7. I study to hard.>>I studied hard.8. English?>> Did you study English?9. Do you know computer coding?>> Correct!10. Yes, I know. >> Correct!11. Is it difficult? >> Correct!12. Yes, It is very difficult. >> Correct!13. I hard to study computer coding but I like many to think. >> I had a hard time studying about computer coding but I like it. 14. I always play coding. >> I alway enjoy computer coding.15. Do you enjoy computer coding? >> Correct!16. When did you usually practice? >> Where do you usually practice? >>OR; When did you practice?17. I am new employee so i don\'y have time to excrise. >> I am a new employee so I don\'t have time to exercise.18. For you. >> How about you?19. Do you feel tried? When you play sport? >> Do you feel tired when you play sport?20. I have Played table tennis for 4 hours today but I am not tired because i feel enjoy when i play sport. >> I played table tennis for 4 hours today but I am not tired because I enjoyed playing that sport.21. Say again I can play table tennis for 4 hours after playing i feel tired. >> Say it again, I can play table tennis for 4 hours but after playing I feel tired.22. I will go to do my homework. >> I will again do my homework.23 See you again nuna ^^ Good night. >>Correct!

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