Hi.
학생이 쓴 원문
Sorry. You give homework to me. It is T-T difficult.
I will study about it for weekend.
anyway.
1. Where are you now?
2. I am in my domitory.
3. If you say.
4. What did you do today?
5. I am very tired today
6. Why?
7. I study to hard.
8. English?
9. Do you know computer coding?
10. Yes, I know.
11. Is it difficult?
12. Yes, It is very difficult.
13. I hard to study computer coding but I like many to think.
14. I always play coding.
15. Do you enjoy computer coding?
16. When did you usually practice?
17. I am new employee so i don'y have time to excrise.
18. For you.
19. Do you feel tried? When you play sport.
20. I have Played table tennis for 4 hours today but I am not tired because i feel enjoy when i play sport.
21. Say again I can play table tennis for 4 hours after playing i feel tired.
22. I will go to do my homework.
23 See you again nuna ^^ Good night.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bonggyu,
Here are my corrections and I hope you have time to read them. See you!
T.Sheela
Sorry. You give homework to me. It is T-T difficult.>> Sorry but the homework you gave me is difficult.I will study about it for weekend.>> I will study on weekend.anyway.>>Anyway, here is the result of our conversation.1. Where are you now?>> Correct!2. I am in my domitory.>>I am in the dormitory.3. If you say.>> If you say that...4. What did you do today?>>Correct!5. I am very tired today.>> Correct!6. Why?>>Correct!>>OR: Why are you tired?7. I study to hard.>>I studied hard.8. English?>> Did you study English?9. Do you know computer coding?>> Correct!10. Yes, I know.
>> Correct!11. Is it difficult?
>> Correct!12. Yes, It is very difficult.
>> Correct!13. I hard to study computer coding but I like many to think.
>> I had a hard time studying about computer coding but I like it.
14. I always play coding.
>> I alway enjoy computer coding.15. Do you enjoy computer coding?
>> Correct!16. When did you usually practice?
>> Where do you usually practice?
>>OR; When did you practice?17. I am new employee so i don\'y have time to excrise.
>> I am a new employee so I don\'t have time to exercise.18. For you.
>> How about you?19. Do you feel tried? When you play sport?
>> Do you feel tired when you play sport?20. I have Played table tennis for 4 hours today but I am not tired because i feel enjoy when i play sport.
>> I played table tennis for 4 hours today but I am not tired because I enjoyed playing that sport.21. Say again I can play table tennis for 4 hours after playing i feel tired.
>> Say it again, I can play table tennis for 4 hours but after playing I feel tired.22. I will go to do my homework.
>> I will again do my homework.23 See you again nuna ^^ Good night.
>>Correct!
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