Hi!!!

2013-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Klein, It was great having fun with you during last two weeks. Your asset really helps me to be confident. Thanks to you, I could complete the interview well. From now on, I really have to study hard to take an exam to be an U.S.registered nurse. However, if I got another interview chance, I'll take this interview course again. And, if possible, I wish I could talk with you again. So, you shouldn't forget me. haha ^^ Anyway, take care of yourself Klein! I miss you already! ^^ Your best, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],

Good morning!

I think I should start calling you by your real name -- [이름].

I am really grateful that I was given the chance to talk with you.

You are such a delight!

Thank you so much for being patient with me.

I bet you still got loads of stories to share.

Too bad we don\'t have enough time to really chat.

Nevertheless, I will certainly never forget you.

I will see to it that you will always be in my thoughts.

Keep on speaking in English and don\'t stop reading English texts.

Enjoy your youthfulness and always smile to lift your spirits up.

Sincerely,

_Teacher Klein

P.S.

I have already accomplished my monthly report for your overall performance.

You may check on it if you have spare time.

Thank you, [이름]

Hello Klein,
>>Correct!
It was great having fun with you during last two weeks.

>>It was great having fun with you for the past two weeks.
Your asset really helps me to be confident.

>>Correct!

OR >> Your asset really helped me to be confident.
Thanks to you, I could complete the interview well.
>>Correct!

OR >> Thanks to you, I was able to complete the interview well.
From now on, I really have to study hard to take an exam to be an U.S.registered nurse.

>>From now on, I really have to study hard to take the exam to be a U.S. registered nurse.

[the tenets in the English language sure are sort of confusing... we don\'t say \"an U.S....\"// it should be \"a U.S.\"]
However, if I got another interview chance, I\'ll take this interview course again.

>>However, If I got another chance for an interview, I\'ll have classes with you again.
And, if possible, I wish I could talk with you again.

>> If given the chance, then I could talk with you again.
So, you shouldn\'t forget me. haha ^^

>>Correct!
Anyway, take care of yourself Klein!

>>Correct!
I miss you already! ^^

>>Correct!
Your best,

[이름]

>>Correct!

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