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I'm Young gon who is your student. I've been studying things which several seminars will be prepared about. I'm gonna leave my offce after 30 minutes at 10 pm. I will go to bed asleep as soon as I get home cause I didn't fell asleep well last night. The reason why I didn't get slept was that I've been a cold. So, I started to have some parmacy which was given by a doctor. I really want me to get better... I always try to study english by a book named "Grammer in Use" everyday night before going to bed and write each of units on my note. I could understand about some grammer related to present, present continuous, present perfect, present perfect, and so on... Ex) I've been working hard since after dinner. It is important to keep my passion to study english hard by myself.

Hello there Young gon! I\'m glad that you\'re able to send me a composition. :p Thank you for sharing how you study English. :p I admire you for your passion to learn English. :p It\'s good that you\'re reading a book about grammar. That will be of great help to you. Anyway, please reveiw the corrections that I\'ve made below. I\'ll see you again tomorrow! Take care always. :p T. Aurora I\'m Young gon who is your student. >>>I\'m Young gon, your student. I\'ve been studying things which several seminars will be prepared about.>>>Correct!I\'m gonna leave my offce after 30 minutes at 10 pm. >>>I\'m going to leave my office 30 minutes before 11 pm. >>>Or: I\'m going to leave my office30 minutes after 10 pm. >>>Or: I\'m going to leave my office at 10:30 pm. I will go to bed asleep as soon as I get home cause I didn\'t fell asleep well last night. >>>As soon as I get home, I\'ll go directly to bed because I didn\'t sleep well last night. The reason why I didn\'t get slept was that I\'ve been a cold. >>>The reason why I didn\'t get enough sleep was that I have a cold. So, I started to have some parmacy which was given by a doctor.>>>So, I went to the pharmacy to buy the doctor\'s prescription .I really want me to get better... >>>I really want to get better.I always try to study english by a book named \"Grammer in Use\" everyday night before going to bed and write each of units on my note. >>>I always study English using the book entitled \"Grammar in Use\" everynight before going to bed and I take notes as well. I could understand about some grammer related to present, present continuous, present perfect, present perfect, and so on...>>>I could understand grammar which are related to present continous, present perfect, and the other tenses of the verb.Ex) I\'ve been working hard since after dinner.>>>Correct!It is important to keep my passion to study english hard by myself. >>>It is important for me to keep my passion in studying English.