Hi
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Hi, I'm going to leave my office right after writting things is done. I should stop by the sport shop where I ordered a shoes for pingpong in order to get that. And then, I'm gonna go to the pingpong gym to practice some skills by a coach. My father also will come there to play that with me.
I'm just waiting for a message from other researcher cause we made an appointment to have dinner tonight. It seems the message has been arrived with my phone right now. She said me she can't do that cause lots of things should be solved as soon as possible. As the result, It seems that I ate some foods for diner alone while I'm goint to the pingpong gym.
I have to do lots of things that are assigned for me by my supervisor from tomrrow. So, I should go home and take a rest.
Bye. Let's go home
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Hello there!
I am glad to read thiscompostiion tonight.
Looking forward to receive more compositions and homeworks next time.
\'Til our next class.
~T. Aurora
Hi, I\'m going to leave my office right after writting things is done.
>>Hi. I\'m going to leave my office right after writing some things.
I should stop by the sport shop where I ordered a shoes for pingpong in order to get that.
>>I should drop by the sport shop where I ordered the pingpong shoes in order to get.
And then, I\'m gonna go to the pingpong gym to practice some skills by a coach.
>>Then, I\'m going to (gonna) go to the pingpong gym to practice with my coach.
My father also will come there to play that with me.
>>My father will also come to play with me.I\'m just waiting for a message from other researcher cause we made an appointment to have dinner tonight.
>>I\'m just waiting for a message from the other researcher cause we made an appointment for dinner tonight.
It seems the message has been arrived with my phone right now.
>>It seems that I already received the message now.
She said me she can\'t do that cause lots of things should be solved as soon as possible.
>>She said she can\'t come since she has lots of things to solve as soon as possible.
As the result, It seems that I ate some foods for diner alone while I\'m goint to the pingpong gym.>>I think I will be eating some foods for dinner alone while going tot he pingpong gym.I have to do lots of things that are assigned for me by my supervisor from tomrrow.
>>I have to do lots of things tomorrow that were assigned to me by my supervisor.
So, I should go home and take a rest.
>>CorrectBye. Let\'s go home!
>>Correct
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