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2013-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi, I made a friend who can speak english well two days ago. My friend of our fresh researchers had me talked to him by english. I talked each other for 2 hours for dinner. He recieved bachleor and master degrees in USA. He had raised in USA for approximately 20 years. I'm gonna go for lunch with him. He promised me to teach lots of things related to english starting from regulary eating a meal. This is that time. I came back now. I ate dinner with him I told you. He gave me lots of adivces. I've known that he has not studied english grammar. That skills was automatically tought by talking a lot. So, I decided to talking to him in speaking english. He agreed with that. He is gonna text me for drinking beer with his girlfriend. I might go there with him to meet her and talk to each other. I had a big confidence to say what I want to say. I decided not to think what I want to say in korean. I will think about that in english not korean. That will help me improve some skills. I went to go to the hospital near to my office for priscriptions related to a sore throad. I've got lots parmacies. A one of them makes me feel much sleeping. I'll try to concentrate what I should do more than usal.

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A nice evening to you! Wow it\'s the weekend again. I hope you will enjoy it well. I\'m very happy to  know that you\'re able to find someone who can talk to you in English.^^ I can see that you boosted your confidence in speaking. Kepp it up! ---- T. Aurora   Hi, I made a friend who can speak english well two days ago. >>  Hi, I made a friend who can speak English well two days ago. My friend of our fresh researchers had me talked to him by english. >> My friend on our fresh researchers had me talked to him in English. I talked each other for 2 hours for dinner. >> We talked to each other for 2 hours for dinner.He recieved bachleor and master degrees in USA. >> He received bachelor and master degree in USA. He had raised in USA for approximately 20 years. >> He promised me that he will teach lots of things related to english starting from regulary eating a meal. I\'m gonna go for lunch with him. >> CORRECT! He promised me to teach lots of things related to english starting from regulary eating a meal.>> He promised me that he will teach lots of things related to English starting from eating a meal. This is that time.>> CORRECT!I came back now. >> CORRECT! I ate dinner with him I told you. >> I ate dinner with him as I told you. He gave me lots of adivces. >> He gave me lots of advice. I\'ve known that he has not studied english grammar. >> I\'ve known that he didn\'t study English grammar. That skills was automatically tought by talking a lot. >> That skills are automatically acquired by talking a lot. So, I decided to talking to him in speaking english. >> So I decided to talk to him in English. He agreed with that. >> CORRECT! He is gonna text me for drinking beer with his girlfriend. >> He is gonna text me to drink beeer with his girlfriend. I might go there with him to meet her and talk to each other.>> I might go there to meet  her and to talk with each other.I had a big confidence to say what I want to say. >> CORRECT! I decided not to think what I want to say in korean. >> I decided not to think of what I want to say in Korean. I will think about that in english not korean. >> I will think in English and not in Korean. That will help me improve some skills.>> CORRECT!I went to go to the hospital near to my office for priscriptions related to a sore throad. >> I went to the hospital near my office for prescriptions related to a sore throat. I\'ve got lots parmacies. >> I\'ve got lots of medicines. A one of them makes me feel much sleeping. >> One of them makes me feel sleepy. I\'ll try to concentrate what I should do more than usal. >> I\'ll try to concentrate on what I should do more than usual.

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