Hi~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi :D
Did you have free holiday?
This week is Korean Thanksgiving Day called Chuseok.
So, I traveled Je-Ju island with my family for a week.
We couldn't go trip in this summer, because my father so busy..
I just arrived at home.
I'm very tired because of heavy treffic jam.
I'll write essay about travel.
l'll tell you about interesting travel story. ^_^
I have to sleep now... Good night!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] J
I am so happy to hear that you have a great holiday with your family. Don’t mind being tired, what matters most is that you enjoyed your time with your family. J
Hi :D
Did you have free holiday?
>> Did you have a good holiday?This week is Korean Thanksgiving Day called Chuseok.
>>This week is Korean’s Thanksgiving Day called Chuseok.
So, I traveled Je-Ju island with my family for a week.
>>So, I traveled Je-Ju Island with my family for a week.We couldn't go trip in this summer, because my father so busy..
>> We didn’t go on a trip last summer because my father was so busy.I just arrived at home.
>> We just arrived home.I'm very tired because of heavy treffic jam.
>>I feel very tired because of traffic jam.I'll write essay about travel.
>> I'll be writing an essay about our trip.l'll tell you about interesting travel story. ^_^
>> l'll tell you interesting story about our travel. ^_^I have to sleep now... Good night!!
>>Correct
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