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Hi teacher I'm gon. Actually I've tried to write my composition on this board for about 1~2 months. But, I stopped writing this. The resaon seemed for me to be lazy. Before you, my previous teacher who is girl makes me improve my english skill well. She tried to have me do this. So, At the beginning of this study by phone, I tried to do this right after stuyding with her. And then, I used to review this as I leave my office at 6 pm. I realy want to be more fluent in speaking enlish so that I go out for work in other countury by using english. So I've started studying english harder than useal from the beginning of this new year. I registered another study that will be handled by phone like this. That can be registered by our inner infra service. I could get a 50% discount. I really want to be more flent and natural in speaking english. Please, help me more doing thins a lot. Thank you for today class. As I told you, my class will be starting right away. See you tomorrow.

Hello there ! Thank you so much for sending in this composition. This will be really helpful in improving your English skills. I encourage you to try sending in essays like this everyday so you can be able to reflect and analyze the corrections afterwards, then you can apply it while we are having the discussion. I will help you improve in the best of my ability. I really admire your eagerness to learn. We\'ll work twice as hard tomorrow then! See you! :) ~T.Dorcy^^~ Hi teacher I\'m gon. >>Correct^^ >>Hi teacher I\'m Gon.Actually I\'ve tried to write my composition on this board for about 1~2 months. >>Actually I used to write my composition on this board for about 1~2 months.  But, I stopped writing this. >>Correct^^  The resaon seemed for me to be lazy. >>The reason is because I seem to be lazy. Before you, my previous teacher who is girl makes me improve my english skill well. >>Before you, my previous teacher who is also a girl makes me improve my english skill well. She tried to have me do this. >>Correct^^  So, At the beginning of this study by phone, I tried to do this right after stuyding with her.>>Correct^^ And then, I used to review this as I leave my office at 6 pm. >>Correct^^I realy want to be more fluent in speaking enlish so that I go out for work in other countury by using english. >>I really want to be more fluent in speaking in english so that I can have the opportunity to work in another country. So I\'ve started studying english harder than usual from the beginning of this new year. >>So I\'ve started studying english harder than usual when this new year started.  I registered another study that will be handled by phone like this. >> I registered to another study that will be handled through phone class like this. That can be registered by our inner infra service. >>Correct^^  I could get a 50% discount. >>Correct^^I really want to be more flent and natural in speaking english. >>I really want to be more fluent and natural in speaking in English.  Please, help me more doing thins a lot. >>Please help me more in doing this. Thank you for today class. >>Correct^^  As I told you, my class will be starting right away. >>Correct^^ See you tomorrow. >>Correct^^