Hi?
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you today?
I will send a e-maill to my global co-worker.
I'm first time to wrrite english-email.
so I'm afraid that because myenglish is not good.
I want you check my-email below.
Hi, Andy! How have you been?
Recently I bought new vaccine software for AD server.
I want to replace Old one by new one in AD server.
but I can't do that because I don't have a admin account.
please let me know how can i do that.
good bye.
HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
1. While I was away on business, I met an old school friend.
a. during
b. while
c. as well as
2. I hope to go jogging later, if the weather will be fine.
a. was
b. is
c. will be
3. prepare for an evening news broadcast takes all day.
a. for preparing
b. preparing
c. prepare
4. As part of a survey, employers asked what they look for when interviewing candidates.
a. asked
b. were asked
c. were asking
5. I cannot check my voice mail message since I get home.
a. since
b.
강사 첨삭
Goodmorning!!I hope you have started the day right.
Thank you for making and sending your assignment.
I really appreciate that you are cooperative in your studies.
I hope this will continue.
I have corrected your assignment and you did good job. You commited some mistakes so try to review it on your break.
I have as well corrected the message that you will be sending to your friend.
You are good in English you just need to be confident.
Take care and will see you in class.
_T.Heidi_
How are you today?
>>CORRECT!!I will send a e-maill to my global co-worker.
>>I will send an e-mail to my global co-worker.
>>>Or: I will send an e-mail to my international co-worker.I\'m first time to wrrite english-email.
>>It is my first time to send a message through e-mail.
>>>Or: It is my first time to send an e-mail in English.so I\'m afraid that because myenglish is not good
>>So I\'m afraid that my English is not good enough.I want you check my-email below.
>>I want you to check my e-mail below.Hi, Andy! How have you been?
>>CORRECT!!Recently I bought new vaccine software for AD server.
>>CORRECT!!I want to replace Old one by new one in AD server.
>>I want to replace the old one in AD server.but I can\'t do that because I don\'t have a admin account.
>>but I can\'t do that because I don\'t have an admin account.please let me know how can i do that
>>Please let me know how to do that.good bye.
>>Goodbye.HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:1. While I was away on business, I met an old school friend.>>CORRECT!!2. I hope to go jogging later, if the weather will be fine.>>is3. prepare for an evening news broadcast takes all day.>>b4. As part of a survey, employers asked what they look for when interviewing candidates.>>b
5. I cannot check my voice mail message since I get home.>>c
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