hi?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Thank you for posting your homework again.
I think you are really a die hard soccer fan. ^^
Anyway,here are some corrections I made for you. Please check them out.
Maybe we can still talk about these ones a little further in class^^.
Your thoughts are really delightful and I enjoy listening to your stories, not to mention, reading them.
Always take care!
~~T.Heidi~~
hi?
>>Hi.
My hobby is playing soccer.
>>Correct!
I love all things of soccer.
>>I love all things about soccer.
My dream was soccer player when i was young.
I didn\'t become it but I am enjoying that now.
>>I didn\'t become one but I am enjoying that now.
I get up at 6 am everyday,and go to the ground of the near by school.
I play soccer for a hour with my club members.
>>I play soccer for an hour with my club members.
It\'s funny and i think It\'s good for my health.
>>It\'s fun and I think it\'s good for my health.
I sometimes have match with another team on weekend.
>>I sometimes have a match with another team on weekend.
My position is midfielder.
I want to improve technic and speed better then now.
>>I want to improve my technique and speed.
I really love soccer.
>>I really love soccer.
1. What is your boss like? (a)
a. He\'s really nice.
b. He likes coffee.
c. He manages the factory.
>>Correct!
2. I really have to go. According to my plane _____ in two hours. (c)
a. can leave
b. is leave
c. leaves
>>Correct!
3. He _____ the staff in March 2005, (b)
a. joined
b. has joined
c. is joining
>>a
4. and he _____ twice in the last two years. (a)
a. has been promoted
b. was being promoted
c. is promoted
>>Correct!
5. She told me she several years ago. (c)
a. was met him
b. would met him
c. had met h
>>Correct!
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