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2013-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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hi? My hobby is playing soccer. I love all things of soccer. My dream was soccer player when i was young. I didn't become it but I am enjoying that now. I get up at 6 am everyday,and go to the ground of the near by school. I play soccer for a hour with my club members. It's funny and i think It's good for my health. I sometimes have match with another team on weekend. My position is midfielder. I want to improve technic and speed better then now. I really love soccer. 1. What is your boss like? (a) a. He's really nice. b. He likes coffee. c. He manages the factory. 2. I really have to go. According to my plane _____ in two hours. (c) a. can leave b. is leave c. leaves 3. He _____ the staff in March 2005, (b) a. joined b. has joined c. is joining 4. and he _____ twice in the last two years. (a) a. has been promoted b. was being promoted c. is promoted 5. She told me she several years ago. (c) a. was met him b. would met him c. had met h

강사 첨삭

Hi there,

Thank you for posting your homework again.

I think you are really a die hard soccer fan. ^^

Anyway,here are some corrections I made for you. Please check them out.

Maybe we can still talk about these ones a little further in class^^.

Your thoughts are really delightful and I enjoy listening to your stories, not to mention, reading them.

Always take care!

~~T.Heidi~~

hi?

>>Hi.
My hobby is playing soccer.

>>Correct!
I love all things of soccer.

>>I love all things about soccer.
My dream was soccer player when i was young.

>>I dreamed to be a soccer player when I was young.
I didn\'t become it but I am enjoying that now.

>>I didn\'t become one but I am enjoying that now.
I get up at 6 am everyday,and go to the ground of the near by school.

>>I get up at 6 AM everyday, and I go to the ground of a neaby school.
I play soccer for a hour with my club members.

>>I play soccer for an hour with my club members.
It\'s funny and i think It\'s good for my health.

>>It\'s fun and I think it\'s good for my health.
I sometimes have match with another team on weekend.

>>I sometimes have a match with another team on weekend.
My position is midfielder.

>>Correct!
I want to improve technic and speed better then now.

>>I want to improve my technique and speed.
I really love soccer.
>>I really love soccer.
1. What is your boss like? (a)
a. He\'s really nice.
b. He likes coffee.
c. He manages the factory.
>>Correct!
2. I really have to go. According to my plane _____ in two hours. (c)
a. can leave
b. is leave
c. leaves
>>Correct!
3. He _____ the staff in March 2005, (b)
a. joined
b. has joined
c. is joining
>>a
4. and he _____ twice in the last two years. (a)
a. has been promoted
b. was being promoted
c. is promoted
>>Correct!
5. She told me she several years ago. (c)
a. was met him
b. would met him
c. had met h

>>Correct!

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