Hi~
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Today I attend the meeting of a bowling club. Our club name is 'My Ball'. My average score of bowling is very low. But bowling club meeting is very fun. We ate the roast duck togather during had a chatter. I have a good time for dinner with a good people.
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Hi [이름] Alang,
Wow, I’m happy that you had a great time today.
I like roasted duck very much to. I think it’s very tasty.
See you in few minutes I'm excited to talk to you,
- Connie -
Today I attend the meeting of a bowling club.
>> Today, I attended a meeting of a bowling club.
Our club name is 'My Ball'.
>> Our club’s name is “My Ball”.
My average score of bowling is very low.
>> Correct
But bowling club meeting is very fun.
>> Correct
We ate the roast duck togather during had a chatter.
>> We ate roasted duck while chatting together.
I have a good time for dinner with a good people.
>> I had a good dinner time with good people.
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