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학생이 쓴 원문
1.Daddy are we almost there yet?
2.The our of reckoning has come.
3.You had better do it right away.
4.A female sheep is called a ewe.
5.My bicycle tire has a slow leak.
The last weekend was nice.
I saw many tourist attracti and a lot of temple,also I so a lot of spring flower.
The other's tourist attraction is nice too.
But our tourist attraction is more beautiful.
I think travel helps our mind and life
강사 첨삭
Hi TOM^^
HAPPY MONDAY^^ I am excited to see you.^^ I am glad that you had a nice weekend.I envy you because you saw a lot of tourist attractions and spring flowers.Did you take a lot of picture? Can\'t wait to talk to you.Please go over the corrections I gave you.^^ Great start for this week! Have a great day!Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.Daddy are we almost there yet?
>> Correct!2.The our of reckoning has come.
>> hour 3.You had better do it right away.
>> Correct!4.A female sheep is called a ewe.
>> Correct!5.My bicycle tire has a slow leak.
>> Correct!The last weekend was nice.
>> Last weekend was nice.
OR >> I had a nice weekend.I saw many tourist attracti and a lot of temple,also I so a lot of spring flower.
>> Is aw a lot of tourist attractions,temples and spring flowers.The other\'s tourist attraction is nice too.
>> The other tourist attraction was nice too.But our tourist attraction is more beautiful.
>> Correct!I think travel helps our mind and life
>> Did you mean: I think travel helps our mind and life to be more artistic.
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