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2013-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.Daddy are we almost there yet? 2.The our of reckoning has come. 3.You had better do it right away. 4.A female sheep is called a ewe. 5.My bicycle tire has a slow leak. The last weekend was nice. I saw many tourist attracti and a lot of temple,also I so a lot of spring flower. The other's tourist attraction is nice too. But our tourist attraction is more beautiful. I think travel helps our mind and life

강사 첨삭

Hi TOM^^ HAPPY MONDAY^^ I am excited to see you.^^ I am glad that you had a nice weekend.I envy you because you saw a lot of tourist attractions and spring flowers.Did you take a lot of picture? Can\'t wait to talk to you.Please go over the corrections I gave you.^^ Great start for this week! Have a great day!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Daddy are we almost there yet? >> Correct!2.The our of reckoning has come. >> hour 3.You had better do it right away. >> Correct!4.A female sheep is called a ewe. >> Correct!5.My bicycle tire has a slow leak. >> Correct!The last weekend was nice. >> Last weekend was nice. OR >> I had a nice weekend.I saw many tourist attracti and a lot of temple,also I so a lot of spring flower. >> Is aw a lot of tourist attractions,temples and spring flowers.The other\'s tourist attraction is nice too. >> The other tourist attraction was nice too.But our tourist attraction is more beautiful. >> Correct!I think travel helps our mind and life >> Did you mean: I think travel helps our mind and life to be more artistic.

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