^^hi!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to know about you.^^
I heard that you have two job, day time as a nurse and evenig time as a English teacther.
I am woking as a nurse internal medicine department at the hospital.
I told you I am woking only day.
The reason is, because I care only an outpatient.
What department do you work ?
I live in Busan, but it's not my hometown. My hometown is hamyang, small country.
Where do you live?
Where are you from?
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!..It was nice meeting you. I also want to know more about you especially that we are both nurses. I am so happy to hear about that.Yes, you are right. I am working as a nurse at daytime. I am working in a Pediatric department. So, my patients are all children. I am based here in the Philippines, here in Baguio City. Hope that you will enjoy having your class with me. See you and thank you for your composition. I really appreciate it! Have fun in learning English!
I want to know about you.^^
>>>I want to know more about you.
I heard that you have two job, day time as a nurse and evenig time as a English teacther.
>>>I heard you have two jobs; you are working as a nurse at day time and English teacher at night time.
I am woking as a nurse internal medicine department at the hospital.
>>>I am working as a nurse in an internal medicine department at the hospital.
I told you I am woking only day.
>>>Just like what I have told you, I am working at day time only.The reason is, because I care only an outpatient.
>>>The reason is because I care about outpatient only.
What department do you work ?
>>>correct sentence
I live in Busan, but it's not my hometown. My hometown is hamyang, small country.
>>>correct sentence
Where do you live?
>>>correct sentence
Where are you from?
>>>correct sentence
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