Hi~

2010-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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hi Camille ~ ( Which is better to call you ? Camille or teacher?) I always appreciate your teaching. It's been a long time to write something on a website. I'm talkative so I want to say lots of words but i couldn't always express clearly so i feel stuffy. I've usually written my thought, feeling or daily life on the web but I couldn't because of routine.( u know, univ. problem, HWs, graduation paper etc ) However, today is free.(actually I almost finish write a paper) so i'm writing^^. You asked me why korean people are conservative. Do you know 'Confucius' or 'Confucianism'? (there is word limitation on this site.....continue on next date )

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear [이름], it was really nice reading your composition here in our website,thank you so much for that!;0)

I really appreciate you being a very nice and smart student of mine..

Just continue what youre doing because I know that in no time, you will improve a lot..Of course, much ,uch better than now my dear..

So if you have some problems reagrding our class, just let me know okie dokie?kkkk...Im always here to help you...

P.S:Anway my dear, you can just call me CAM..if you want PRETTYCAM,hehehe..kidding..any will do

hi Camille ~ ( Which is better to call you ? Camille or teacher?)
>>correct
I always appreciate your teaching.
>>I always appreciate the way you teach me.
It's been a long time to write something on a website.

>>Its been a long time since I last wrote something on this website.

I'm talkative so I want to say lots of words but i couldn't always express clearly so i feel stuffy.
>>I'm talkative so I want to say lots of words but i cant always express myself clearly thats why I feel sulky.
I've usually written my thought, feeling or daily life on the web but I couldn't because of routine.( u know, univ. problem, 

HWs, graduation paper etc ) However, today is free.(actually I almost finish write a paper) so i'm writing^^. 
>>correct
You asked me why korean people are conservative. Do you know 'Confucius' or 'Confucianism'?
(there is word limitation on this site.....continue on next date )

>>correct

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