Hi~

2010-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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There is a country called 'Chosun' before Korea. It's national religion(but it is different with other religion, it's kind of tradition, custom) was Confucianism and it has been remained until now. And Confucianism is characterized by conservative mind. I hope my insufficient explanation would help you. :-) and.. I don't mean to criticize Korean edu system but every high school student remembers english words like this [alphabet spelling - korean meaning]. So do I. Therefore it's hard to make expression using a word though I know the meaning exactly. There are two friends who got a 960 score at TOEIC, but they got under 80 score at IBT because they couldn't SPEAK and WRITE in English at all. It's so sad. talk later~~ good evening!!

강사 첨삭

That was very very impressive!I really dont know much about history, but you gave me 

such information about that,thank you so much my dear..I always admire you being a 

smart student..I just want you to continue what you've started, okay?;)

Good night and see you again tomorrow! 

There is a country called 'Chosun' before Korea. 

>> Correct

It's national religion(but it is different with other 

religion, it's kind of tradition, custom) was Confucianism and it has been remained until now. 

>> Correct

And Confucianism is characterized by conservative mind. I hope my insufficient explanation would help you. :-)
>>correct
and.. I don't mean to criticize Korean education system but every high school student remembers English 

words like this [alphabet spelling - korean meaning]. 

>> Correct

So do I. Therefore it's hard to make expression 

using a word though I know the meaning exactly.

>> Correct

There are two friends who got a 960 score at TOEIC,

>> Correct

 but they got under 80 score at IBT because they couldn't SPEAK and WRITE in English at all. It's so sad.
>>correct
talk later~~ good evening!!

>> Talk to you later, good evening!!

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