Hi~
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That was very very impressive!I really dont know much about history, but you gave me
such information about that,thank you so much my dear..I always admire you being a
smart student..I just want you to continue what you've started, okay?;)
Good night and see you again tomorrow!
There is a country called 'Chosun' before Korea.
>> Correct
It's national religion(but it is different with other
religion, it's kind of tradition, custom) was Confucianism and it has been remained until now.
>> Correct
And Confucianism is characterized by conservative
mind. I hope my insufficient explanation would help you. :-)
>>correct
and.. I don't mean to criticize Korean education system but every
high school student remembers English
words like this [alphabet spelling - korean meaning].
>> Correct
So do I. Therefore it's hard to make expression
using a word though I know the meaning exactly.
>> Correct
There are two friends who got a 960 score at TOEIC,
>> Correct
but they got under 80 score at IBT because they couldn't SPEAK and
WRITE in English at all. It's so sad.
>>correct
talk later~~ good evening!!
>> Talk to you later, good evening!!
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