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Hello!
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Hi. Good morning!
>>Correct!
Today is Monday time is really so fast.
>>Today is Monday. Time is really so fast.
I have a great news.
>>Correct!
Originally, My boyfriend interview day is Saturday time week.
>>Originally, my boyfriend\'s interview is on Saturday this week.
The day we are planing to go on a picinic with his friends.
>>For that day, we are planning to go on a picnic with his friends.
Fortunately, Interview date is changed on Tuesday.
>>Fortunately, his interview was moved on Tuesday.
I am so happy but his not.
>>I am happy but he is not.
He could know that he can work more or not as he pass the twice interview.
>>He will know if he can work or not if he passes the two interviews.
I hope he will pass the interview so he get a reguler work.
>>I hope he passes his interview, so he can get a regular work.
Anyway Have a great day and see you soon!!
>>Correct!
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