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2013-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Hi. Good morning! Today is Monday time is really so fast. I have a great news. Originally, My boyfriend interview day is Saturday time week. The day we are planing to go on a picinic with his friends. Fortunately, Interview date is changed on Tuesday. I am so happy but his not. He could know that he can work more or not as he pass the twice interview. I hope he will pass the interview so he get a reguler work. Anyway Have a great day and see you soon!!

강사 첨삭

Hello!
You never fail to make me smile by just posting your work on our composition board.
\"Cheerfulness keeps up the spirit of the one who possesses it and brings a smile to the lips of others.\"
Enjoy your day!^^
See you!

Hi. Good morning!

>>Correct!
Today is Monday time is really so fast.

>>Today is Monday. Time is really so fast.
I have a great news.

>>Correct!
Originally, My boyfriend interview day is Saturday time week.

>>Originally, my boyfriend\'s interview is on Saturday this week.
The day we are planing to go on a picinic with his friends.

>>For that day, we are planning to go on a picnic with his friends.
Fortunately, Interview date is changed on Tuesday.

>>Fortunately, his interview was moved on Tuesday.
I am so happy but his not.

>>I am happy but he is not.
He could know that he can work more or not as he pass the twice interview.

>>He will know if he can work or not if he passes the two interviews.
I hope he will pass the interview so he get a reguler work.

>>I hope he passes his interview, so he can get a regular work.
Anyway Have a great day and see you soon!!

>>Correct!

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