hi !
학생이 쓴 원문
hi ! klein ! how r u up to lately ?
this is my homework ! it's quite late ! sorry !
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
How are you going to make someone who looks really scary simmer down?
i will go to the pub ! Two bottle of beer will do !
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I am doing good and my routine has dramatically changed.
To be honest, I am not up to something special.
Perhaps, this is what I have to think about.
Thanks for making me realize that I have to work on something for my own good.
Oh, now I remember!
I am learning the British accent for you.
I think I am likely to upset you later.
Please bear with me, okay?
I will keep on practicing, so you have to continue with your efforts to improve on all your English communication skills as well.
Let us keep on pushing to meet our goals!
And before I say goodbye, I have to say that your answer to the question that I posted as your homework intrigues me.
So you are not a heavy drinker, are you?
But then, are you going to bring along that scary person with you to a pub?
Maybe, you are also going to pay for what he/she will order.
What a nice person!
If you want to say otherwise here, please do so in our class later.
I will see you then!
_Klein
hi ! klein ! how r u up to lately ? >>Hi, Klein! What are you up to lately?/ How have you been?this is my homework ! it\'s quite late ! sorry !>>Correct
OR >> Here is my homework:
[I submitted it quite late, I am sorry!]HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:How are you going to make someone who looks really scary simmer down?i will go to the pub !
>>Correct
OR >> I will go to the pub! [capitalization]
Two bottle of beer will do !
>>Two bottles of beer will do!
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