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2010-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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Today was nice. Because It was breezy(?) Today was breezy(?) I like spring and fall. What do you like season? -------------------------------------- What did you do this day? - I went/ to the hospital Did you have a lot of patient? No, today /we did not have/ a lot of patients. You are not so busy even me in the hospital. I'm also working/as a nurse/at daytime. We didn't have/ a lot of patients too. We are not we don't feel tired. What time did you go home? I came home at 9:00 I studied English and I read a book. Do you have your book? What page show now? Do you have a boyfriend? How many years meet togather boyfriend? -We have been togather /for fore years. Do you still have a good relationship togather? - Yes we have a good relationship togather.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]….Its good that you listened to our conversation. I am certain that you are learning well. See you on Monday.  T. Jessica Today was nice. >>>correct sentence Because It was breezy(?) Today was breezy(?) >>>Because it was breezy. I like spring and fall. >>>correct sentence >>>I like spring and fall seasons. What do you like season? >>>What season do you like? What did you do this day? >>>correct sentence - I went/ to the hospital >>>correct answer: I went to the hospital. Did you have a lot of patient? >>>Did you have a lot of patients? No, today /we did not have/ a lot of patients. >>>correct sentence You are not so busy even me in the hospital. >>>You were not so busy like me when I was in the hospital I'm also working/as a nurse/at daytime. >>>correct sentence We didn't have/ a lot of patients too. >>>correct sentence We are not we don't feel tired. >>>We both don’t feel tired. What time did you go home? >>>correct sentence I came home at 9:00 >>>I came home at 9:00 p.m I studied English and I read a book. >>>correct sentence Do you have your book? >>>correct sentence What page show now? >>>What page are we now? Do you have a boyfriend? >>>correct sentence How many years meet togather boyfriend? >>>How many years have you’ve been together with your boyfriend? -We have been togather /for fore years. >>>We have been together for four years. Do you still have a good relationship togather? >>>Do you still have a good relationship together? - Yes we have a good relationship togather. >>>Yes, we have a good relationship together.

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