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Today was nice.
Because It was breezy(?) Today was breezy(?)
I like spring and fall.
What do you like season?
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What did you do this day?
- I went/ to the hospital
Did you have a lot of patient?
No, today /we did not have/ a lot of patients.
You are not so busy even me in the hospital.
I'm also working/as a nurse/at daytime.
We didn't have/ a lot of patients too.
We are not we don't feel tired.
What time did you go home?
I came home at 9:00
I studied English and I read a book.
Do you have your book?
What page show now?
Do you have a boyfriend?
How many years meet togather boyfriend?
-We have been togather /for fore years.
Do you still have a good relationship togather?
- Yes we have a good relationship togather.
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Hi, Mi [이름]….Its good that you listened to our conversation. I am certain that you are learning well. See you on Monday.
T. Jessica
Today was nice.
>>>correct sentence
Because It was breezy(?) Today was breezy(?)
>>>Because it was breezy.
I like spring and fall.
>>>correct sentence
>>>I like spring and fall seasons.
What do you like season?
>>>What season do you like?
What did you do this day?
>>>correct sentence
- I went/ to the hospital
>>>correct answer: I went to the hospital.
Did you have a lot of patient?
>>>Did you have a lot of patients?
No, today /we did not have/ a lot of patients.
>>>correct sentence
You are not so busy even me in the hospital.
>>>You were not so busy like me when I was in the hospital
I'm also working/as a nurse/at daytime.
>>>correct sentence
We didn't have/ a lot of patients too.
>>>correct sentence
We are not we don't feel tired.
>>>We both don’t feel tired.
What time did you go home?
>>>correct sentence
I came home at 9:00
>>>I came home at 9:00 p.m
I studied English and I read a book.
>>>correct sentence
Do you have your book?
>>>correct sentence
What page show now?
>>>What page are we now?
Do you have a boyfriend?
>>>correct sentence
How many years meet togather boyfriend?
>>>How many years have you’ve been together with your boyfriend?
-We have been togather /for fore years.
>>>We have been together for four years.
Do you still have a good relationship togather?
>>>Do you still have a good relationship together?
- Yes we have a good relationship togather.
>>>Yes, we have a good relationship together.
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