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2013-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi verna~ I felt I need to study amount of voca. Actually, I'm feeling that my english skill has a limit while talking to you. As I thouhg, I always make sentenses that I'm thinking with a few voca. I will memorize the sentenses I told you and many vocas. I've been talking with my co-workers for an hour in the lounge and I'm writting things that I'm thinking. I shouldn't have taken a rest for a long time. Some works were given to me by other worker. Actually I didn't notice that this probolem that should be resolved was given. Eventhough I should solve this probolem ASAP, I will work off right now and meet my friend. I believe that any important problem that should be resolved will be done by somebody that can have special know-how.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sir Seo Hyuk,

              I hope you had a jazzy day earlier! Anyway, it\'s good that you\'re doing your best to learn new vocabulary words. If you want to learn more vocabulary words, then you need to read English materials like magazines, newspapers, books, comics and so on. You will learn a lot of vocabulary words here. I\'ll see you again tomorrow! Enjoy the rest of your evening! See yah!

~Teacher Verna

Hi verna~
>>>Hi Verna.~

>>>(Names should always start with a capital letter.)

I felt I need to study amount of voca. 

>>>I feel that I need to study more vocabulary words.

Actually, I\'m feeling that my english skill has a limit while talking to you. 
>>>Actually, I feel that my English skill has a limit while talking to you.
As I thouhg, I always make sentenses that I\'m thinking with a few voca.
>>>As I thought, I always make sentences with a few vocabulary words.
I will memorize the sentenses I told you and many vocas.
>>>I will memorize the sentences that I\'ve told you and I\'ll also memorize many vocabulary words.
I\'ve been talking with my co-workers for an hour in the lounge and I\'m writting things that I\'m thinking.

>>>I\'ve been talking with my co-workers for an hour in the lounge and I\'m writing things that I think of.

I shouldn\'t have taken a rest for a long time.

>>>Correct!

Some works were given to me by other worker.

>>>Some works were given to me by another worker.

>>>Or: Some works were given to me by my co-worker.

Actually I didn\'t notice that this probolem that should be resolved was given. 
>>>Actually, I didn\'t notice that this problem was given.

Eventhough I should solve this probolem ASAP, I will work off right now and meet my friend. 

>>>Even though I should solve this problem ASAP, I will call it a day and meet my friend.

>>>Or:  Even though I should solve this problem ASAP, I will call it quits right now and meet my friend.

I believe that any important problem that should be resolved will be done by somebody that can have special know-how.

>>>I believe that any important problem that should be resolved should be done by somebody who has a special know-how,

>>>Or: I believe that any important problem that should be resolved should be done by an expert on that field.

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