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2013-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi. Good morning!! ooups I am so tired. Yesterday I had a great time with my boyfriend. I suggest that we will meet at least twice a week each other. I felt strange to him. I want to see him more because we don't know what happends up each other. I want to share our idea or ourself every day. Anyway, I didn't do exercise from last Friyday. I couldn't wake up early so after finishing work I am going to do it. Though I am tired but I have to ckeck my body. Have a nice day. See you soon!! When I talking to you I am so happy!!

강사 첨삭

Hello!

Thanks for sending in this marvelous homework.^^

Please review the corrections and we can talk more about it in class.

I do feel great whenever we exchange ideas in class.

See you!

~T.Chloe^^

Hi. Good morning!!

>>Correct
ooups I am so tired.

>>Oops, I am so tired!
Yesterday I had a great time with my boyfriend.

>>Correct
I suggest that we will meet at least twice a week each other.
>>I suggest that we meet at least twice a week.

I felt strange to him.

>>I felt strange about him.
I want to see him more because we don\'t know what happends up each other.

>>I want to see him more because we don\'t know what happens to each of us.
I want to share our idea or ourself every day.

>>I want us to share our daily ideas.
Anyway, I didn\'t do exercise from last Friyday.

>>Anyway, I didn\'t do the exercise from last Friday.

I couldn\'t wake up early so after finishing work I am going to do it.

>>Correct

Though I am tired but I have to ckeck my body.
>>Even though I\'m tired, I have to see if my body can still do it.
Have a nice day.

>>Correct

See you soon!!

>>Correct
When I talking to you I am so happy!!

>>I feel so happy whenever I talk with you!

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