Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for doing your composition.
It\'s nice to know that you are happy and contented in what you have.
And you are really blessed that there are many people around you who are loving you.
Yo should be really grateful for that.
I\'ll see you later! ^^
T. Chloe^^
Good morning!!
>> CORRECT
This week, Time is really fast.
>> CORRECT (time-not capitalize)
Tomorrow alreday is friyday.
>> It\'s already Friday tomorrow.
I am little tried so I want to sleep more.
>> CORRECT
I am grateful that I have a familly and a job.
>> CORRECT [family]
I also can controll myself.
>> Correct (**control)
Yesterday, I felt that how much many people love me.
>> Yesterday, I felt how much people love me.
Today I am going out to meet my friends.
>> CORRECT
have a nice and see you !
>> Have a nice day and see you!
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