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2013-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Hi! Today is very boring day. I completly finishied this semester. I am loose all of things. I just want to rest and weathe was very hot. I want to study at home. I think to earn the momey is hard. But I should earn a money to use it. I am planning to have a date with boyfriend and we will eat chicken and beer. It will be fun. Chloe, see you tonight!! Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Congratulations because you finally completed your semester. That calls for a celebration so it is a good idea to go out with your boyfriend. Have some fun! See you tonight then in our class Ma\'am. Just enjoy your day! -Teacher Chloe Hi!>>CORRECT! Today is very boring day. >>Today is a very boring day. I completly finishied this semester. >>I completely finished this semester. I am loose all of things. >>I lose all things. I just want to rest and weathe was very hot. >>I just want to rest but the weather is very hot. I want to study at home.>>CORRECT! I think to earn the momey is hard. >>I think it is hard to earn money. >>I think earning money is hard. But I should earn a money to use it.>>But I should earn money to use. I am planning to have a date with boyfriend and we will eat chicken and beer. >>I am planning to have a date with my boyfriend. We will eat chicken and drink beer. It will be fun.>>CORRECT! Chloe, see you tonight!!>>CORRECT! Bye! >>CORRECT!

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