Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi!
Today is very boring day.
I completly finishied this semester.
I am loose all of things.
I just want to rest and weathe was very hot.
I want to study at home.
I think to earn the momey is hard.
But I should earn a money to use it.
I am planning to have a date with boyfriend and we will eat chicken and beer.
It will be fun.
Chloe, see you tonight!!
Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Congratulations because you finally completed your semester. That calls for a celebration so it is a good idea to go out with your boyfriend. Have some fun! See you tonight then in our class Ma\'am. Just enjoy your day!
-Teacher Chloe
Hi!>>CORRECT! Today is very boring day.
>>Today is a very boring day. I completly finishied this semester.
>>I completely finished this semester. I am loose all of things.
>>I lose all things. I just want to rest and weathe was very hot.
>>I just want to rest but the weather is very hot. I want to study at home.>>CORRECT! I think to earn the momey is hard.
>>I think it is hard to earn money.
>>I think earning money is hard. But I should earn a money to use it.>>But I should earn money to use. I am planning to have a date with boyfriend and we will eat chicken and beer.
>>I am planning to have a date with my boyfriend. We will eat chicken and drink beer. It will be fun.>>CORRECT! Chloe, see you tonight!!>>CORRECT! Bye!
>>CORRECT!
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