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강사 첨삭
Hello! Great job!
Just don\'t forget to organize your thoughts.
Try speaking English everyday. It would help you more in your English learning.
Anyway, mistakes make us better so don\'t be afraid to commit mistakes. Just go on with learning different things and have fun!:)
Hi!
>>correct
I am so sorry last night.
>> I am so sorry for what happened last night.
I was dating with my boyfriend.
>>correct
OR >> I was with my boyfriend.
>> I had a date with my boyfriend.
That was very noisy and I was rude.
>>Something/one was very noisy and I was rude.
Tonight I will be at home and more calm before yesterday.
>> Tonight, I will be at home and I am calmer than yesterday.
Have a nice day!
>> correct
See you soon!!
>> correct
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