Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jenny!
I'm very interested in our class!
Thank you for your feedback!
I really want to study more and more.
The material which the manager sent is appropriate to me.
I think we can study one unit for two or three classes (by the number of topics)
Especially, I want to focus on question type 1 and 2.
Acutally, I had more problem to make an answer in these part
(to telling myself.. or related topics) rather than any other parts.
It's lack of my brainstorming! So I know this is a good chance to meet you! I love my textbook for it consists of a lot of brainstorming parts. And it also directs me to approach easily.
As you know, grammer is my weakest point!
I'll expect today's class. I need your help! ^^
강사 첨삭
JK,
Thank you so much for writing. It’s my pleasure to have classes with you too! I am glad that you liked the material .
I will be looking forward to our class later too!
--Jenny
Hi, Jenny!I'm very interested in our class!
>>Correct.Thank you for your feedback!
>>Correct.I really want to study more and more.
>>Correct.The material which the manager sent is appropriate to me.
>>Corrct.I think we can study one unit for two or three classes (by the number of topics)
>>Correct.Especially, I want to focus on question type 1 and 2.
>>Correct.Acutally, I had more problem to make an answer in these part.
>>Actually, I have more trouble in coming up with answers in these parts.(to telling myself.. or related topics) rather than any other parts.
(in telling about myself or related topics than the other parts).It's lack of my brainstorming!
>>It’s because of lack of brainstorming practice!
So I know this is a good chance to meet you!
>>Correct.
I love my textbook for it consists of a lot of brainstorming parts.
>>I love my textbook for it contains a lot of brainstorming parts.
And it also directs me to approach easily.
>>And it also directs me to approach the questions easily.As you know, grammer is my weakest point!
>>As y ou know, grammar is my weak point!I'll expect today's class.
>>I’ll be looking forward to our class for today.
I need your help! ^^
>>Correct.
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