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hi Cam today was first day of school festival. I took some athletics from 10 to 4. i'm sorry not to read the article because of fatigue. I will read the article before every class ~ I often think that organizing what i want to speak is more important than speaking my opinion. The rate of progress doesn't matter. I need a practice to make my organizing skill better. I know my sentences are totally wrong. but there is no way that i can know the right form(word sequence or proper word etc). Is there any course for sentence organizing ? otherwise, would you let me know right form of sentecne during class ...?

Hello there once again my dear [이름], it was really great receiving a composition from you..;0) About our times call, dont worry about that. I know you also need time to rest because you just had your first day of school festival. And Im also glad to know that you joined some sports in that festival.^^ Anyway, about the correct sentence organization. The only advice I can give you is not to focus more on complex sentences. It would be much better to start with the basics and if you are already familiar with the basics, little by little you can now start with complex sentences.;) Actually my dear, Im quite afraid to check you verbally because I really want you to express your opinions well and your ideas are great, so I often check your corrections on our website.But if you want, I can still correct you verbally my dear.. Just be confident in speaking and I know you can do it my dear,okie dokie?Im always here to help you.. Always, Cam   hi Camtoday was first day of school festival. >>correct!  I took some athletics from 10 to 4. i'm sorry not to read the article because of fatigue. I will read the article before every class ~>>correct!I often think that organizing what i want to speak is more important than speaking my opinion. >>correct! The rate of progress doesn't matter. I need a practice to make my organizing skill better. >>correct! I know my sentences are totally wrong. but there is no way that i can know the right form(word sequence or proper word etc). >>correct! Is there any course for sentence organizing ? otherwise, would you let me know right form of sentecne during class ...? >>correct!