Hi~^^
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I had some questions, but time is very short.
I couldn't ask you all questions.
I am up to the level today.
you give me level 4 for my grammer and vocabulary, right?
It's incredible.
I wrote my level yesterday.
so you give me hige score, aren't you?
Anyway, I am happy.
because I think that my English will get better soon.
Thank you .
At 1)the beginning of 2)a twentieth century, East Los Angeles became 3)a popular immigrant destination. In 4)the early 1900s, Russians, Jews, Japanese, and Mexicans all had 5)a significant presence in 6)an area. Living east of 7)the river and
working in nearby factories, or traveling by electric rail into downtown Los Angeles, immigrants and their children helped fuel 8)the prosperity of 9)the growing metropolis. By 10)the onset of World War II, East Los Angeles had almost become 11)a exclusively Latino community, soon reinforced by 12)the_ influx of Mexican workers who arrived to man the ma
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Hello there my dear [이름]! :)
What can I say? You really deserved level 4 with your grammar and vocabulary today.
You really exerted a great effort today. Keep that up! :)
I know you still have a lot of questions and I would be more than glad to answer them. :)
Thank you so much for the wonderful conversation today.
Enjoy the rest of the day! :)
Always,
T. Isabel :)
I had some questions, but time is very short.
>>Correct!I couldn\'t ask you all questions.>>I couldn\'t ask you many questions.
>>I couldn\'t ask you all questions that I have.I am up to the level today.
>>I am up with my level today.
>>I got into a higher level today.you give me level 4 for my grammer and vocabulary, right?
>>You gave me level 4 for my grammar and vocabulary, right?It\'s incredible.
>>Correct!I wrote my level yesterday.
>>Correct!so you give me hige score, aren\'t you?
>>So you gave me a higher score, didn\'t you?Anyway, I am happy.
>>Correct!because I think that my English will get better soon.
>>Correct!Thank you .
>>Correct!At 1)the beginning of
>>Correct!
2)a twentieth century, East Los Angeles became
>>the twentieth century, East Los Angeles became
3)a popular immigrant destination.
>>Correct!
In 4)the early 1900s, Russians, Jews, Japanese, and Mexicans all had
>>Correct!
5)a significant presence in
>>Correct!
6)an area. Living east of
>>the area. Living east of
7)the river andworking in nearby factories, or traveling by electric rail into downtown Los Angeles, immigrants and their children helped fuel
>>Correct!
8)the prosperity of
>>Correct!
9)the growing metropolis. >>Correct!
By 10)the onset of World War II, East Los Angeles had almost become
>>Correct!
11)a exclusively Latino community, soon reinforced by
>>an exclusively Latino community, soon reinforced by
12)the_ influx of Mexican workers who arrived to man the ma
>>an influx of Mexican workers who arrived to man the machines in
13.) the area\'s burgeoning war industries.
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